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Critique By:
Stefan Engström (K:24473)
4/4/2005 1:43:51 AM
The treatment is perfect for the meditative mood I often see in your photographs. Re. the possible tilt - I think you need to go by the verticals to determine that (the bridge support, the silo) and they confirm the feel one get from the waterline.
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Critique By:
Stefan Engström (K:24473)
9/23/2004 9:24:05 PM
I like this chaos - as far as I am concerned there is only one rule for foot photography - it has to make the viewer want to eat what is on display and you succeed admirably here. There are some minor details I think may be worth discussion. Some of regards the presentation as a triptych and to what degree they hang together. I like the focus in the two top images, but the last one seems to be a little bit of a runt of this particular litter. The images blend into each other and I wonder if continuing the thin line you used for the frame between the panels would be helpful? The insalata caprese on top looks very tasty to me and I like how it manages to separate itself from the flower-petal salad below it. Again the third image with fenocchio and chives seems to lack that ability to distinguish itself from its neighbor. Colors are great throughout, but the two hotspots in the middle image are not ideal, all IMHO of course.
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