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Critique By:
zia yasrebi (K:95)
12/19/2004 8:32:42 PM
very nice capture! these beatiful trees,bring the mind to old days of capital (Tehran)
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Critique By:
Ned Ali (K:11928)
12/8/2004 10:27:35 PM
Hi Raha 
I rotated that image for 2 reasons:
1- the inclination of the spoon was too much, for me. go back to the photo and observe the green line round the bowel.
2- the dark empty area in the lower left corner is too much .. i think rotating the image has reduced it. what do you think?
oh .. I have added some effects on the other pic, LIFE, but i won't post it as i would love to see what you come up with.
best wishes to you, Raha.
ned
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Critique By:
raha (K:28)
12/8/2004 7:42:40 PM
thx to inform me about humor thing ned!!it might be mistaken...
regards
raha,besides i'll apply the change u mentioned a.s.a.p on the pics but i didn't get,y u rotated it?!
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Critique By:
Ned Ali (K:11928)
12/5/2004 7:47:15 AM
i would suggest you apply the same to the other photo, LIFE. I think it will look fantastic.
best wishes,
ned
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Critique By:
Ned Ali (K:11928)
12/5/2004 7:45:37 AM
i would have loved to see this in b&w.
i think it needs a slight anticlockwise rotaion.
now .. this is my version, and i hope you like it.
here's what i did:
1- rotated the image 5 degrees CCW.
2- cropped it.
3- copied the green channel to a new file.
4- applied DIFFUSE GLOW filter.
5- applied colour toning.
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Critique By:
Ned Ali (K:11928)
12/5/2004 4:35:55 AM
nice shot!
the light ghost is distracting .. otherwise it's an interesting shot!
what makes you think it's HUMOR?!!
keep posting, Raha.
ned
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Critique By:
Ned Ali (K:11928)
12/5/2004 4:29:39 AM
i wonder how it would have looked like in b&w!
nice shot though.
keep up the good work, Raha.
Thanks for your kind comment on MY DAUGHTER
Best Wishes,
ned
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Critique By:
Kiarang Alaei (K:49415)
12/3/2004 9:34:43 PM
Nice form and thought maryam.you have good eyes for photography. the form of tree is some funny.just as balancing the colors and contrast it could be enhance. continue your good shoots.
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Critique By:
hAmTa (K:600)
12/3/2004 9:27:32 PM
alive and so empthy.....nice and deep scene...little week composition...
but it is only a scene and still it is far from picture...it can be a good painting with an excelent idea...
khosh bashi
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Critique By:
naylor . (K:746)
12/3/2004 4:17:23 PM
I think you should use a photo editing tool to enhance the colours in this photo. Apart from that I think it is a good picture.
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Critique By:
raha (K:28)
12/1/2004 8:37:06 PM
thx,besides,i didn't get u!!what crop?
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Critique By:
A. Baksh (K:517)
12/1/2004 7:40:46 AM
nice colors and so much trafic,what about this crop if u don't mind
regards
A.Baksh
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Critique By:
hAmTa (K:600)
12/1/2004 7:29:52 AM
So....weT
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Critique By:
Kiarang Alaei (K:49415)
11/29/2004 8:45:57 PM
Maryam, your thoughts is delicate, attending to the details and still lifes is always attractive.but it could be better result if you use macro filters for these shots.anyway,your composition is nice, the camera is so near the subject and cause distraction in perspective.reflections of day light and windows must be hidden with your angle! thanks for share and hope to see your other efforts.
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Critique By:
A. Baksh (K:517)
11/29/2004 1:37:51 PM
wow by my view its reallyt cute 1
regards
A.Baksh
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Critique By:
A. Baksh (K:517)
11/29/2004 1:36:20 PM
verygood
i like this kind of still life photos
keep it up maryam
A.Baksh
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Critique By:
raha (K:28)
11/29/2004 1:24:19 PM
thx buddy!
hope to c ya again...
marya
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Critique By:
Kostas Tzanetos (K:22012)
11/29/2004 1:10:12 PM
welcome to usefilm maryam :-)
i like this close-up shot! great composition and appropriate lighting as well as nice image quality make it very cute,at least for me ;-)
keep shooting,and be happy!
kostas
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Critique By:
Kiarang Alaei (K:49415)
11/27/2004 6:52:47 AM
Welcome Maryam! this is a nice effort for starting, it showes your solitary look to the still life and your sorround.nice angle to creat an abstract form.hope to see more photos from you.
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