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Critique By:
Davide Benini (K:165)
4/28/2004 4:13:34 PM
Ottima foto, gran composizione.
Io la vedo un po' giallastra; forse ritoccando un op' le curve. Comunque era il tramonto, questione di gusti :-)
Ciao,
Davide
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| Photo By: andrea erreenne
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Critique By:
Davide Benini (K:165)
4/27/2004 9:43:12 PM
Tha's a nice natural portrait. I lke tha grain, it enchances the image. To me it looks just a little bit too blurred... is it out of focus, or was she moving? Maybe it's just a question of taste :-)
At any rate, a nice pic.
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| Photo By: Daithí O' Donoghue
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Critique By:
Davide Benini (K:165)
4/27/2004 9:37:05 PM
Grand shot.
I understand the situation: you compose the image, you're rady to shoot, you think: "I desperately need a subject in the foregroud", and people passing think they'd better not disturb your composition, ad you only manage to get them in the background. Fortunately, here he's in the right spot :-)
Great pic,
Davide
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| Photo By: ken krishnan
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Critique By:
Davide Benini (K:165)
4/27/2004 6:40:46 PM
That's a very very very nice pic. Both the composition and the tone are grand, and the girl expression is gorgeous. you know what? The green door makes just a small contrast to the girls' sweater; a brown or red door would have enhanced the image greatly.
Bye,
Davide
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| Photo By: Ján HRONSKÝ alias ?ltý D
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Critique By:
Davide Benini (K:165)
4/27/2004 6:36:58 PM
That's a grand shot. Imaginatoin rules here :-)
A very good idea, and I'm very tempted to steal it. You know what? If you ever try again this kind of shot, try putting a face in the cup, I'm very curious.
Thanks for sharing,
Davide
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Critique By:
Davide Benini (K:165)
4/27/2004 6:32:23 PM
Che bel verde!!! Ottima esposizione e nitidezza.
Avrei tagliato un po' a sx per rendere l'immagine meno centrale.
Comunque ottima.
Bye,
Davide
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| Photo By: Stefano Borgogni
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Critique By:
Davide Benini (K:165)
4/17/2004 7:12:12 PM
That's a very good idea, the composition is almost perfect and the black branches on the front make a nice contrast with the landscape. The only minor flaw is the little branch on the pointing up in the centre. Of course I understand you cound't eliminate it. Maybe, moving around a bit.. Or photoshop ;-)
At any rate, a very nice pic
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| Photo By: Jan de Olde
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Critique By:
Davide Benini (K:165)
4/17/2004 5:27:27 PM
Tàim ag iarracht feabhas a chur ar mo chuid "photgraphy" agus mo Ghaeilge; are we misusing usefilm?
Cheers,
Davide
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| Photo By: Daithí O' Donoghue
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Critique By:
Davide Benini (K:165)
4/17/2004 5:09:01 PM
Overexposition, that's why! That's fun, it's Ireland, but it almost looks like Africa!
Tha's a very nice pic, the composition is good, and the satured colours give it an extra punch.
I would have kept the tree on theleft completetly out, and I would have included the the trees on the right.
As far as its being "out of focus", it's probably due either to a bad scan or to the excessive compression ratio of the jpg; dimension an image this size, you can safely keep the jpg quality as high as possible.
Maith an fear,
Davide
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| Photo By: Daithí O' Donoghue
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Critique By:
Davide Benini (K:165)
4/17/2004 4:56:45 PM
The composition is quite good, but, in my opinion, there is a couple of flaws.
First of all, the pic slants towards the right;
then, the light is not so good. Of course you cannot be blamed for that :-)
I also fell the lack of a "subject", something in the foregroud to strenghten the idea of perspective.
Still, it's a nice picture.
Bye,
Davide
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Critique By:
Davide Benini (K:165)
4/9/2004 4:04:15 PM
The colour is absolutely stunning.
Have you done much post processing, or is it straight from the camera?
Marvellous shot!
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Critique By:
Davide Benini (K:165)
4/2/2004 8:41:55 AM
Hi folks, this is also an occasion to introduce myself. Here's Davide from Verona, Italy; I'm here to learn. Criticism is always welcome :-)
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