thanks alot chris! this is when i first started into my photography frenzy and i would of changed some things about this photo if done now but i still like it a bit..thanks for the comments Ant
Anthony, Good try. I like the feel of this image, it has an older feel to it. I might suggest an overall softening of the image to give it some texture (maybe that's not the right word) or intimacy maybe. Cheers, C
It's a great pose from the model and excellent timing from the photographer to capture the moment.
Composition-wise it is a bit centered, perhaps you could repoint the camera a bit more to the right, so the flower is nearer to the edge of the frame.
I am not sure that you deliberately shot into the sun to get so much flare (caused by the sun hitting the lens) but I find the effect detracts from the image, reducing the contrast and saturation of the flowers.
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