While your image is well taken, one has to determine where the true focus of this capture resides. The pillar certainly dominates the composition, while the young lady is relegated to a subordinate place and a secondary lighting. The pillar itself really has little to impress us with, and the model is not dressed to compete with the qualities of the pillar. You have a very effective preference for angled framing, but, if one uses it too often, then it will lose its effect, particularly since you use the same angle mostly.
Something to think about, Kindest regards, Alan Mead, Quebec. Caada.