Hi Diego, I like the twinkle in her eyes, she realy seems to be enjoying herself! Her pose is excellent, it exudes cosiness and the protection against the cold. I like the tightly cropped composition, but it also lacks a wee bit of dynamism. Maybe it is too centered, maybe the (imaginary) lines are too vertical / perpendicular, if you know what I mean.... The lighting might also be a bit stronger, None the less it is a very nice portait! Well done, my friend!