OF COURSE, thanks for your honest critique. Sometime we are not espected to take a picture, and we have to capture it at the place we are. children move to much , they don`t pose. and also you are right with the flash, i was to close to them, thank a lot, roberto
Hi there Roberto! I realy like the moment you captured, however, maybe you should have moved a bit to your left, and a bit more to the floor, I know conditions were probbably bad, but it's just something to look forward in the future. If you were making a documentary/family photo the exposure is fine, but if looking for a bit more of that artistic touch, I advise you to loose the flash, or just to reposition it, so it doesn't hit the subjects so hard. I hope I wasn't too hard on you, but you wanted an honest critique :) Keep up the good work!
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