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Lucas L
{K:12145} 3/21/2007
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...wonderful combination....a pool table a lovely girl...always results well.
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Paul Lara
{K:88111} 1/1/2007
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I'm interested...what could I do to improve this shot?
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Archibald &Meriyam
{K:9} 1/1/2007
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nice light...but i'm thinking that you can push this pic in better composition.
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Hanggan Situmorang
{K:37833} 12/19/2006
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Hi, Paul,
What I meant by 'frontal portrait' is taking the portrait right in front off her to emphasize the linearity of the pool table; however, the more I look at this photo the more I am uncertain about my idea..:)
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Wayne Winsauer
{K:7331} 12/19/2006
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Maybe cliche, but you did it justice. Wonderful lighting and tone. Nice work Paul.
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Chris Boivin
{K:9030} 12/19/2006
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Still well composed Paul. Clarity is perfect and again lighting is very good. I like the dark background. One suggestion on the left there is a dark grey stip..maybe a door frame. Maybe covering this up so the entire background is black. Just a thought..
Chris
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Paul Lara
{K:88111} 12/19/2006
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? I don't understand 'frontal portrait' Hanggan.
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Hanggan Situmorang
{K:37833} 12/19/2006
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Superb lighting, but I guess it might be stronger to make a frontal portrait, imho :)
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