I like what you were looking here, but IMO the composition is too busy and the subject is not very clear, i guess is not the best framing this shot can have, maybe some other angle or something else. The other nitpick is the exposure, i guess is dificult to read exposure in a shot like this because light reflected confuses the camera, but maybe some braketing could help... And finally... the shot is not the sharpest... if its a shooting problem, try using the correct lens for those shots, a wide angle will be right, and if its a scanning problem i hope this link can be helpful: http://www.usefilm.com/articles/sharpness/ cheers! keep shooting!
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