Interesting photo, stong emotion in a girl face. For me, a composition should be moving little bit to the right, if it's possible. Too much space on a left. What about focus, it maybe just problem with scanner. Best regards, Elena
Compelling picture but, as Roderik has said, a bit washed out. However, one must admit that the lighting conditions seem to have been very difficult and I know how bad they can be in that part of the world. You seem to have dealt fairly well with the difficulties. May be a polarizer would have helped with the specular reflections off the oranges.
IMO the shot could have been a bit sharper though.
Very compelling photograph. Good job. The colours are a bit washed out though, consider tweaking them a bit in photoshop. You can do the job with curves.
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