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Ferran Lacruz
{K:5466} 11/7/2003
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Good work.This is a very nice portrait.The lighting is great
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Pieter Visser
{K:1582} 7/10/2003
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The face is a tad bit dark for me... i wouldh've use a fill flash but then again am not sure how natural that would've looked. Greater DOF would have been better to keep the hands in focus ...this is just my 2cents. This still remains a great portrait!
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Chris Lauritzen
{K:14949} 7/7/2003
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Kelly,
Nicely done pose but again the lighting is flat, she needs a bit of warmer light to brighting her up. Even if you used a warming filter and your flash that might help. As I said the pose is great and very natural now just work on the lighting.
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Michael W.
{K:842} 7/5/2003
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This is a very nice portrait. I do find the lighting on her head just a bit of a distraction but the overall image is very well done.
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SarahM none
{K:7836} 7/5/2003
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The composition of this is lovely and I very much like the background you have chosen. The lighting on her face is good, but some of the detail of her hair seems to have been lost. Her face is very sharp, but there is some softness around her hands. Perhaps a bit higher DOF would help with this if it is not your intention? Good portrait and one that I am sure will be cherished!
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