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Critique By:
Curtis Feather (K:5130)
3/24/2005 11:27:34 PM
Calin,
thanks, I appreciate the thoughtful comments. as for the crop, i shot it this way because my intent was to create something not as centered on the subject herself, but more for a mix of her, and the forms created by the hair and the stripes with the landscape. i think a looser crop would greatly reduce the emphasis on the shapes and forms, and be more focused on just a person. i appreciate the good comments though. thanks.
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| Photo By: Curtis Feather
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Critique By:
Curtis Feather (K:5130)
3/24/2005 11:13:12 PM
nice work here. the lake has a very charming and soft/relaxing sense to it. it's nice to see you shooting in a variety of styles and manners, experimental. keep it up.
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| Photo By: Antonio Trincone
(K:23167)
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Critique By:
Curtis Feather (K:5130)
3/24/2005 11:10:51 PM
very nice work here. the skin textures are nice and the controlled exposure and contrast allow this. you don't have large bleached areas. when you talk about editing, it seems your focus is more on after the fact. you're producing nice work, so i think the focus should not be on the edit, but on the original shot, as if it were a negative. focus on the original and how to correct it and then editing will be unnecesary or very easy. nice job here.
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| Photo By: Lara dos Santos
(K:1578)
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Critique By:
Curtis Feather (K:5130)
3/24/2005 11:06:36 PM
Great radiating, almost pulsating sense of contrast here. the lines have very a very strong dominance here. nice work.
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Photo By: Verena Rentrop
(K:15233)
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Critique By:
Curtis Feather (K:5130)
3/24/2005 11:05:03 PM
i enjoy the very theatrical sense the lighting and geometric forms have. nice work here.
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| Photo By: Agust Agustsson
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Critique By:
Curtis Feather (K:5130)
3/17/2005 5:41:01 PM
Lara, thanks for the comments. I like the perpective here and the composition. I generally prefer high conrtrast images, but here I think you have lost a lot of details in the large white highlights. This may be partially due to the jpeg format, but if you could burn down the exposure in their just a little, i think the added detail and softening of the white would add a lot. very nice composition and perspective though.
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| Photo By: Lara dos Santos
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Critique By:
Curtis Feather (K:5130)
3/17/2005 5:15:16 AM
thanks, i appreciate the comments. after studying photography i began seeing things around me in a different sense, a new perspective. often as black and white, just values and tones, other times as angles and colors. its nice when you realize the world around us is full of beauty, often with simple forms and light.
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| Photo By: Curtis Feather
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Critique By:
Curtis Feather (K:5130)
3/17/2005 5:12:43 AM
Calin, nice work here. I like the abstract qualities of the light and dark spaces. Interesting use of shadow play.
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| Photo By: Calin Hanchevici
(K:1459)
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Critique By:
Curtis Feather (K:5130)
3/17/2005 5:11:47 AM
Gracias por sus comentarios. Aquí tienes una foto muy plena. Me gusta la composición simple y las formas geometricas. También tiene colores buenos y simples. Muy bien hecho.
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| Photo By: Maria José Barres
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Critique By:
Curtis Feather (K:5130)
3/16/2005 5:32:26 PM
another very strong work here. great exposure and dark overall values to promote this idea of pain and suffering. nice use of perpective and the horizontal composition works well.
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| Photo By: Rene Asmussen
(K:138)
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Critique By:
Curtis Feather (K:5130)
3/16/2005 5:23:33 PM
Claudia, muy bien hecho aquí. Me gusta mucho la composición tuya y las formas abstractas que tiene. Has hecho un dibujo fuerte y interesante.
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| Photo By: ClaÜdia Garza
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Critique By:
Curtis Feather (K:5130)
3/16/2005 5:20:15 PM
Bienvendio a usefilm y espero que puedas entenderme. tú imagen está muy fuerte, con una composición agradable de geometría, líneas, y formas. La luz al dentro de tú imagen está muy bien, fuerte en algunas partes y más sutil en otras. muy bien hecho y que tengas suerte.
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| Photo By: Eugenio Mussini
(K:191)
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Critique By:
Curtis Feather (K:5130)
3/16/2005 5:12:47 PM
nice and simplified. abstract qualities here are strong and an interesting composition. nice work.
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| Photo By: Salvo Valenti
(K:17038)
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Critique By:
Curtis Feather (K:5130)
3/16/2005 5:11:06 PM
strong use of shadows and creative forms to create this. interesting composition and nice abstract qualities.
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| Photo By: Joe Kaplan
(K:1399)
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Critique By:
Curtis Feather (K:5130)
3/16/2005 5:09:31 PM
nice perspective here and the enlarging of the iron into a ship works well. it really seems to dominate the plane and be a large, powerful object. nice details and textures also.
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| Photo By: Gökhan KARAMAN
(K:8878)
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Critique By:
Curtis Feather (K:5130)
3/16/2005 5:07:39 PM
very nice work here. very impressionistic look to it. great color hues and use of them.
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| Photo By: Warren Simons
(K:741)
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Critique By:
Curtis Feather (K:5130)
3/16/2005 6:24:45 AM
Tom, nice exposure and lighting here and great capture of the tense emotional moment. a lot can be pulled from viewing this, nice work.
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| Photo By: Tom Miskiewicz
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Critique By:
Curtis Feather (K:5130)
3/16/2005 6:22:40 AM
nice graphical effects here. the idea and concept behind the work is achieved in the overall presentation of the end result. nice work.
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| Photo By: Judi Liosatos
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Critique By:
Curtis Feather (K:5130)
3/16/2005 6:20:58 AM
nice work here. in your portfolio i see you use color hues very effectively. often single or subtle colors, which works well with your images. strong image here.
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| Photo By: Hani Ghayhab
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Critique By:
Curtis Feather (K:5130)
3/16/2005 6:18:40 AM
nice work here. looking at your portfolio, i see this as one of your stronger compositions and end results. the isolated subject and lighting to accompany this have a nice effect. good job.
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| Photo By: Robin Dripps
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Critique By:
Curtis Feather (K:5130)
3/16/2005 6:16:58 AM
the infared really gives this a creapy and different type of sense to it. very interesting work. it has a surrealistic and abstract sense to it also. nice job.
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| Photo By: Juergen Kollmorgen
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Critique By:
Curtis Feather (K:5130)
3/16/2005 6:15:40 AM
excellent capture of skin tones and textures, especially on the hand on the right. compositionally, the top right is a little open, but the textures and tones on the hands fulfill this gap. nice work.
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| Photo By: Klaus Matlé
(K:289)
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Critique By:
Curtis Feather (K:5130)
3/16/2005 6:12:27 AM
very strong feeling of isolation here. the simplified composition gives it an abstract sense, enhanced with the green hues. nice job here and welcome to usefilm.
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| Photo By: Capin the Fourth
(K:117)
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Critique By:
Curtis Feather (K:5130)
3/16/2005 6:10:14 AM
strong exposure and overall composition. the capture of light brings nice values and tones and adds to the overall sense of the image. nice humor in this also.
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| Photo By: Ryan Donahue
(K:159)
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Critique By:
Curtis Feather (K:5130)
3/16/2005 6:03:02 AM
very strong use of repetition here and the skyline and color hues give this a real surrealistic sense. very intersting work.
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| Photo By: Agust Agustsson
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Critique By:
Curtis Feather (K:5130)
3/16/2005 6:01:36 AM
nice abstract sense here, and the small section of the pinkish hue brings a lot of variety and interest alongside the strong repetition.
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| Photo By: Craig Nisnewitz
(K:625)
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Critique By:
Curtis Feather (K:5130)
3/16/2005 6:00:12 AM
very interesting capture and idea here. strong visual and conceptual stuff. nice job.
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| Photo By: Kai Yiu, Chan
(K:431)
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Critique By:
Curtis Feather (K:5130)
3/15/2005 4:39:57 PM
very interesting color hues and light tones. the DOF here works great also, with the focus just on the tips.
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| Photo By: Erik Neldner
(K:10846)
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Critique By:
Curtis Feather (K:5130)
3/15/2005 4:35:22 PM
very inviting and cozy feel. the warm lighting and the soft tones help this. good job.
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| Photo By: George Black
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Critique By:
Curtis Feather (K:5130)
3/15/2005 4:28:57 PM
Sam, your recent posts have been great, and keep building in the content level. this is really nice here, full of emotional aggression, perseverance, anger, something. the horizontal lines do a lot for the composition and pushing this idea of movement with the feelings.
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| Photo By: Samantha P
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