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Critique By:
Bill Sawyer (K:65)
11/1/2003 5:43:30 PM
Her eyes grab you and don't let go! Great composition and lighting.
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| Photo By: Kala Wlodarczyk
(K:2567)
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Critique By:
Bill Sawyer (K:65)
7/12/2003 1:16:50 PM
I like the composition.
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| Photo By: marco biancardi
(K:10582)
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Critique By:
Bill Sawyer (K:65)
6/27/2003 10:00:54 AM
Wonderfully sharp and clear. I can't imagine her leting you get this close! Admirable...
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| Photo By: Jorge Herrera
(K:496)
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Critique By:
Bill Sawyer (K:65)
6/24/2003 7:13:26 PM
Pete, my image is next to yours, so I thought I'd add my two cents worth while I'm looking. I like good macros and this qualifies as that. The toughest part of macro photography for me is getting the DOF right, and you did so here. Every important part of the butterfly is in focus. The color is right on, and I like the composition that puts the pink thing in the backround squarely between the wings. This works very well to my eye, I will probably be trying to do something similar and as well in the near future...
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| Photo By: Pete Nicholls
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Critique By:
Bill Sawyer (K:65)
6/23/2003 7:15:34 PM
Nan, this is in a Nature Center where the deer, until recent culling, were populous and easily approached. I was, maybe , 30 feet? I stalked this fawn for about an hour before I got close enough. I need to clean this up a bit in PS, but I like the shot.
Thanks for your interest!!
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| Photo By: Bill Sawyer
(K:65)
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Critique By:
Bill Sawyer (K:65)
6/20/2003 4:55:25 PM
This works very well for me. The eyes grab my attention and do not let go! And that, for me anyway, is what portraiture should do. Very strong "Emotional Appeal" rating. Nice!!
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| Photo By: Suvomoy Mitra
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Critique By:
Bill Sawyer (K:65)
6/16/2003 7:02:12 PM
This is the kind of thing that I wish I knew how to do. I very much like this image, I think it has a strong emptional appeal, at least to me. Very well done, Shahram, I wish it were mine!
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| Photo By: Leo Sharen
(K:66)
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Critique By:
Bill Sawyer (K:65)
6/12/2003 7:26:35 PM
Thanks for commenting, I thought this would sink into total oblivion w/o a single comment. This just didn't scan well, as the purose of the image was the layers of grasses in fore-, mid-, and background. The slide has a very discernable "paintbrush" effect which, for the life of me, I can't get onto a scan. The deer is just a point to draw the eye into the picture. Oh well, time to move on the the next effort...
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| Photo By: Bill Sawyer
(K:65)
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Critique By:
Bill Sawyer (K:65)
6/11/2003 6:25:01 PM
Exciting! Well presented, well exposed for difficult light.
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| Photo By: Jason Anderson
(K:-24)
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Critique By:
Bill Sawyer (K:65)
6/9/2003 4:33:33 PM
Wonderfully sharp! The lighting and composition are right on. Impressive...
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| Photo By: Nancs -
(K:588)
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Critique By:
Bill Sawyer (K:65)
6/5/2003 3:10:58 PM
Outstanding, not a flaw that I can see. Just couldn't be better.
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| Photo By: simon wootton
(K:2542)
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Critique By:
Bill Sawyer (K:65)
6/5/2003 2:40:37 PM
Good effort, accomplished what I think you were after. My only criticism might be that the suject appears to me to be not quite as sharp as the line of the leaf it's sitting on. Nitpicking, though.
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| Photo By: Lori Swymn
(K:31)
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Critique By:
Bill Sawyer (K:65)
6/3/2003 7:26:06 PM
Jim Forbes, you have a good eye - it WAS taken through dirty glass. I'm a novice at scanning & PS, so will have to wait until I learn how to "touch up" before I can give this the attentionit deserves. Thanks for the insights...
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| Photo By: Bill Sawyer
(K:65)
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Critique By:
Bill Sawyer (K:65)
6/1/2003 5:55:14 PM
A superb effort. Great detail considering the extension, and lighting is perfect. Wish it were mine!
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| Photo By: Ronnie Gaubert
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