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Critique By:
Scott McFadden (K:5663)
10/20/2003 2:01:38 AM
Sanyukta ,
Photoshop is popular because it makes use of a feature called layers.
To add the rectangle without putting it in a seperate layer just causes more work for later so since this may still be fresh in you would be best to use the feature duplicate layer in layers and show layers in the windows section.
Then simply click the box on the left most side with the eye in it and it will make that layer dissappear.its still there just hidden.
Next add the rectangle on the copyed layer.
then use the distort or liquefy tool to bend the rectangle.
then delete around the rectangle with the eraser and selection box with delete.
then click the box in the layers window to show the underneath layer again.
to make it wispy just turn the opacity slider down in the top layer to suit.
save as something in photoshop then flatten image then save as a jpeg.
that way if you need to come back to it you will find it easy to fix up.
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| Photo By: Sanyukta Sharma
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Critique By:
Sanyukta Sharma (K:269)
10/15/2003 5:52:47 AM
thank you ...
about the curve, i noticed that and tried to make a bulge but this was when i had already got the rectangle on the eye so even the iris was becoming a huge bulge. but now im going to curve out the rectangle and then move it onto the eye . lets see how that works out .
will see how it looks with a little more colour too ...
thank you all a lot for your patience and comments 
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Critique By:
Chris Moore (K:5591)
10/13/2003 5:04:02 AM
Hi Sanyukta,
First I must say I don't know photoshop or how to do this.
However, I'd say for the rectangle to be a more realistic reflection it has to curve with the eye. Because the surface of the eye is not flat I would expect the sides of the rectangle to be more curved, and for the corners of the rectangle to stretch out, following the curve of the eye. As I can't describe this very well, I've drawn it very badly and pasted it into this comment. My drawing is an exaggeration.
You could perhaps choose the wettest parts of the eye and blur the rectangle more in those areas, possibly adding little spiral "wisps" in some areas.
I like what you have already and look forward to seeing any changes you make!
Best wishes,
Chris
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Critique By:
Stefan Engström (K:24473)
10/10/2003 12:31:15 PM
I think you've done a very good job with PS. If realism is what you are after, maybe you should use a color photograph of the eye, maybe slightly desaturated if you want the golden rectangle to dominate.
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Critique By:
ppdix (K:17069)
10/10/2003 11:37:35 AM
Yahi Pyar Hai :-)
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Critique By:
Federico Garza (K:386)
10/10/2003 11:34:06 AM
It gives me the creeps, but it is an excellent photo!
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Critique By:
Flávio Moore (K:467)
10/10/2003 11:05:38 AM
Impressionante esta foto... perfeita!!!
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Critique By:
Mark Beltran (K:32612)
10/1/2003 10:23:50 PM
I don't know what it is that's blurring the perimeters, but I like it. It's kind of like a soft vignette. I like the camera angle, too.
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Critique By:
Albert Gacsádi (K:244)
9/14/2003 1:43:33 PM
Unique tones, good composition! I would like to see the original, please
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Critique By:
Bahadir k (K:8825)
9/14/2003 11:17:32 AM
good expression with the levels,stunning bw and red combination,i also like to use this trick in my photos lately,
regards
bahadir
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Critique By:
Teunis Haveman (K:37426)
9/14/2003 10:37:57 AM
Beauti creatieve flower
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Critique By:
Pat F (K:43)
9/14/2003 10:37:27 AM
Very Nicely taken. Good backdrop and sharp on a few and not on some. Very intresting. I also posted one that has a few blury some not.
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Critique By:
Fabio Keiner (K:81109)
9/2/2003 1:21:38 PM
tree growing
wind blowing
listen to that picture
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Critique By:
ana ribeiro (K:21290)
9/2/2003 11:17:42 AM
beautyful !
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Critique By:
José Eduardo Cruz (K:13180)
9/2/2003 6:41:24 AM
Very beautifull picture!!!!
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Critique By:
B:)liana (K:30945)
9/2/2003 6:01:16 AM
Scarry night. I like it.
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Critique By:
Amna Al Shamsi (K:21795)
9/2/2003 4:51:21 AM
it looks like if there si reflection.. good one.
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Critique By:
Yannic Meerbergen (K:2990)
9/2/2003 4:29:19 AM
Excellent! The low DOF is not a real problem, as it adds to the athmosphere of the image.
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Critique By:
Sanyukta Sharma (K:269)
9/2/2003 4:22:33 AM
is from a digital camera ... dof is kind of bad and i wouldnt have kept the futhur parts out of focus had it been manual focussing but i love this result.
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Critique By:
Bart Aldrich (K:7614)
9/1/2003 7:51:27 AM
This is a very lovely and original composition. If the passion flower were exposed well it would be perfect. But the mood is wonderful.
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Critique By:
Jaap Poot (K:7926)
8/31/2003 4:53:54 AM
Great composition
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Critique By:
Isabelle Becker (K:238)
8/30/2003 2:56:44 PM
très belle photo, belle fille qui porte très bien cette jolie fleur dans ses cheveux
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Critique By:
Kajo Buzek (K:1459)
8/30/2003 1:35:32 PM
very nice portrait. i like color of skin and the flower. i don?t know if the hairs are sharp enough. very good work
kajo
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Critique By:
MARLA MITCHELL (K:681)
8/30/2003 12:39:13 PM
Beautiful Image!!
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Critique By:
Amna Al Shamsi (K:21795)
8/30/2003 12:33:59 PM
nice picture, will love to see the rest of her lovely face
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Critique By:
Balazs Borocz (K:451)
5/6/2003 2:47:15 PM
kind picture!
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Critique By:
Valentin D (K:283)
5/2/2003 9:42:21 PM
You look so happy... that it makes me happy too when looking at this photo.
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Critique By:
John Strazza (K:11535)
4/28/2003 5:34:06 PM
i really like this one .. as it brings joy ... more so than many other images i have seen tonight... it's not perfect, but it is so alive and full of life ..
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Critique By:
Andreas Wolkerstorfer (K:5090)
4/28/2003 3:17:50 PM
your eyes look as if you are happy
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Critique By:
Dirck DuFlon (K:35779)
4/28/2003 1:02:06 PM
A very nice self-portrait, Sanyukta! You've chosen an interesting perspective that I think works quite well. A little more contrast would help the photo have more impact, as well as a bit of sharpening if possible. I wish we could see your hands, too. Good job, though!
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