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Critique By:
Brian T. Ach (K:1742)
1/10/2008 5:59:19 AM
Nice lighting here, great shadow detail!
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Photo By: Paul Lara
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Critique By:
Brian T. Ach (K:1742)
1/10/2008 5:58:13 AM
very pretty model, but here the "diffusion" is not so succesful for me. I know this is a departure for you, but her hair has turned smudgy because of the effect. To make it not so abrupt, use a graduated layer in Pshop to gently diffuse the shot.
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| Photo By: Paul Lara
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Critique By:
Brian T. Ach (K:1742)
1/10/2008 5:55:07 AM
Nice effort here, but you have lost the whole right ide of her face to shadows from her hair and lack of fill. It would help if you had soft more fill over there. Maybe some more diffusion, as the light is kind of overly-contrasted, unless that is what you are gong for. But good effort on this, nice model.
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| Photo By: Paul Lara
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Critique By:
Brian T. Ach (K:1742)
2/19/2007 6:41:34 AM
Thanks for the comment...I actually took this looking up, not down!
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| Photo By: Brian T. Ach
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Critique By:
Brian T. Ach (K:1742)
2/17/2007 8:37:01 AM
stunning image, great tones...superb
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| Photo By: Wojtek Kwiatkowski
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Critique By:
Brian T. Ach (K:1742)
2/11/2007 8:55:49 PM
I might have to get a 5D just because of this picture...remarkable tones and sharpness...great shot
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| Photo By: maciek duczynski
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Critique By:
Brian T. Ach (K:1742)
1/30/2007 6:46:25 AM
Excellent...right near the Danielli where I stayed...great shot
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| Photo By: t marie
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Critique By:
Brian T. Ach (K:1742)
9/28/2006 8:41:39 PM
Nice shot...you really have a way with the abstracts, like a fine painter...but I like mannequins (check out my series if so inclined)
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| Photo By: Emgy Massidda
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Critique By:
Brian T. Ach (K:1742)
9/28/2006 8:28:15 PM
Can't think of a better place to be right now...nice shot!
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| Photo By: Chandru Shahani
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Critique By:
Brian T. Ach (K:1742)
9/17/2006 9:14:28 PM
superb, great tones in difficult lighting
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| Photo By: Hanggan Situmorang
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Critique By:
Brian T. Ach (K:1742)
9/16/2006 7:42:22 PM
Paul, while I dig the picture, I am not sure it is the best for a card. It looks nice here, but when printed 3.5x2, it will be hard to pick out what it is immediately...the people will be very small. Print one out at that size and see what you think. Just a thought...
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| Photo By: Paul Lara
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Critique By:
Brian T. Ach (K:1742)
9/16/2006 7:37:40 PM
Thanks Paul, yes it is a candid backstage at a show..
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| Photo By: Brian T. Ach
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Critique By:
Brian T. Ach (K:1742)
9/16/2006 7:11:51 PM
Your work is excellent!
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| Photo By: anabela oliveira
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Critique By:
Brian T. Ach (K:1742)
9/15/2006 4:09:20 AM
very very nice
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| Photo By: Ed Krebs
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Critique By:
Brian T. Ach (K:1742)
8/5/2006 5:00:35 AM
Still the Best.
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| Photo By: John Strazza
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Critique By:
Brian T. Ach (K:1742)
7/25/2006 5:05:44 AM
This is my kitty Stinky...she is a 9 year old Grand Champion Maine Coon, and yes, she is the most loving, loyal, friendly best pet I have ever had. Really smart too.
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| Photo By: Brian T. Ach
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Critique By:
Brian T. Ach (K:1742)
7/25/2006 1:42:05 AM
very nice, nice comp. with the clouds mirroring the fence...
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| Photo By: Keith Saint
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Critique By:
Brian T. Ach (K:1742)
5/30/2006 3:44:38 AM
excellent
your photos are nice
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| Photo By: Thanh Doan Ky
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Critique By:
Brian T. Ach (K:1742)
5/28/2006 11:34:51 PM
I completely agree with Terry. Nothing here suggests what you are saying about this shot. the one guy is not even looking at the lady. This is not reportage photography, it is adding to the conflict. Stoking the fire.
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| Photo By: Kambiz K
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Critique By:
Brian T. Ach (K:1742)
5/28/2006 11:30:25 PM
What kind of critique is this? "Could be better than this?" This community is not built on pointless critiques such as this. Tell you what- when you can get hired as the house photographer to an exclusive A-list Hollywood party such as this, you can post your own version of this shot.
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| Photo By: Brian T. Ach
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Critique By:
Brian T. Ach (K:1742)
5/28/2006 6:08:21 AM
63 ford galaxie 500? nice shot
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| Photo By: Michael Charles
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Critique By:
Brian T. Ach (K:1742)
5/28/2006 5:54:25 AM
this is just beautiful
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| Photo By: vito lentini
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Critique By:
Brian T. Ach (K:1742)
4/27/2006 6:53:16 AM
Perfectly stunning...did you use a flash? Just great...
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| Photo By: Rich Swanner
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Critique By:
Brian T. Ach (K:1742)
4/27/2006 6:51:46 AM
beautiful colors, excellent composition...nice
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| Photo By: Sergio Cárdenas
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Critique By:
Brian T. Ach (K:1742)
2/21/2006 6:14:42 AM
beautiful
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| Photo By: Evren Sahin
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Critique By:
Brian T. Ach (K:1742)
1/4/2006 9:56:35 PM
Really excellent, Ina, I think you are on to something here, and you should continue to explore it!
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| Photo By: Ina Nicolae
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Critique By:
Brian T. Ach (K:1742)
1/2/2006 1:17:18 PM
beautiful...
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| Photo By: Syrie Kovitz
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Critique By:
Brian T. Ach (K:1742)
10/29/2005 10:12:31 PM
SUPERB, but you might have shot this at faster than 1/60, because there is no blurring... maybe 1/250?
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| Photo By: yagmur kizilok
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Critique By:
Brian T. Ach (K:1742)
10/20/2005 3:56:21 AM
interesting take on this shot! One of my favorite places to shoot, I think you'll recognize this shot:
http://www.usefilm.com/image/477871.html
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| Photo By: Ina Nicolae
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Critique By:
Brian T. Ach (K:1742)
10/15/2005 6:05:56 PM
congrats, Jim, it is a Desoto ('57)
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| Photo By: Brian T. Ach
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