Jake, again, I think line up your shot, your horizon is at an angle, which is distracting. Your subject is also center mass again. Don't be afraid to get closer. Without being too dramatic here, it looks as if your girlfriend (subject) has lines which would really aid this shot. I don't think you were going for the scenery here, as the large area of snow in front is distracting from it. From the way the mountains are going, I think even changing your angle 90 degrees clockwise. That looks like it may have produced a better background for you.
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