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vanessa shakesheff
{K:68840} 9/25/2006
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Beautiful composition ..lovely detail and lighting ..i have never heard the verse before ..it is sad..nessa 7
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ana ribeiro
{K:21290} 9/4/2006
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Baha very creative , you too!:)
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Ornella Erminio
{K:4881} 9/3/2006
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bellissima composizione
ciao
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Mahmoud Baha Sadri
{K:19634} 9/3/2006
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It is sometimes really depressing to find that wing broken,isn't it Mary?
baha
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Mahmoud Baha Sadri
{K:19634} 9/3/2006
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if Ictenbey says so,then it is..thank you...baha
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Mary Slade
{K:40338} 9/3/2006
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Perfect image and writing. Great left wing writier. The impurity of human beings. The warmth of your image and its title just all of a piece Baha.
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ictenbey / Emrah ICTEN
{K:16316} 9/3/2006
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so nice photograph ! ...
well done ! ...
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Shadi Porooshani
{K:11236} 9/3/2006
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very good collection & very good composition dear Baha:) superb clarity;)
all the best for you as always
shadi
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Shirley D. Cross-Taylor
{K:174133} 9/3/2006
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I'm so glad Morad posted the story...I had never heard it...and now your photo title makes sense, Baha. Lovely photo!:)
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Matt Mitchel
{K:3149} 9/3/2006
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All those men were there inside,
when she came in totally naked.
They had been drinking: they began to spit.
Newly come from the river, she knew nothing.
She was a mermaid who had lost her way.
The insults flowed down her gleaming flesh.
Obscenities drowned her golden breasts.
Not knowing tears, she did not weep tears.
Not knowing clothes, she did not have clothes.
They blackened her with burnt corks and cigarette stubs,
and rolled around laughing on the tavern floor.
She did not speak because she had no speech.
Her eyes were the colour of distant love,
her twin arms were made of white topaz.
Her lips moved, silent, in a coral light,
and suddenly she went out by that door.
Entering the river she was cleaned,
shining like a white stone in the rain,
and without looking back she swam again
swam towards emptiness, swam towards death.
Pablo Neruda
Sadri, this is a nice and very educational one!!
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Mojgan Akhgar
{K:168} 9/3/2006
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All those men were there inside,
when she came in totally naked.
They had been drinking: they began to spit.
Newly come from the river, she knew nothing.
She was a mermaid who had lost her way.
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Pablo Neruda
Wonderful title and image Baha !!
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