This is an interesting place you have shown us. I do like how those two poles come out on either side of the small window in the wall there, it tells of careful composition of the image. Maybe you could crop it a bit on the right, and perhaps also at the top to get rid of some of that black opening.
I find the lighting appropriate for this location, but more contrast wouldn't hurt the image in my opinion.
You have my undying respect for carting a view camera around Mesa Verde (Sprucetree House is at Mesa Verde, isn't it). Now, if you show us a picture from Balcony House taken with a view camera, I'll be astounded!
I think you captured the mood of the place very nicely.