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Critique By:
Mihir Shah (K:837)
6/4/2007 6:27:16 AM
very nice.
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Photo By: Mark Julian
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Critique By:
Mihir Shah (K:837)
6/2/2007 8:41:02 AM
moody and emotive. wonderful picture, mark. my compliments.
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Critique By:
Mihir Shah (K:837)
6/2/2007 8:40:20 AM
fantastic shot. Good composition and excellent tones. . very nice self capture.
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Critique By:
Mihir Shah (K:837)
6/2/2007 8:27:04 AM
a very nice capture.. you have some active creative brain cells. nice shot. my compliments.
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Critique By:
Mihir Shah (K:837)
6/2/2007 8:24:04 AM
prashant.. i think the impact would be enhanced in a b&w version. great location.
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| Photo By: prashant bhat
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Critique By:
Mihir Shah (K:837)
6/2/2007 8:19:13 AM
excellent photograph prashant. one of my favs too in your portfolio. shot to be proud of. my compliments.
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| Photo By: prashant bhat
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Critique By:
Mihir Shah (K:837)
6/2/2007 8:05:41 AM
a very nice capture, prashant. good picture.
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Critique By:
Mihir Shah (K:837)
6/2/2007 8:01:25 AM
hey prashant. Nice capture and crop.
From the placement of the necklace, I am assuming that this is a product shot. I agree with the Roland over the placement, but that is upto the client in the end.
Couple of points which I think will improve this shot are:
1. the background. Since you have used only one light to light the background, it goes from white on the right to grey at the left. A uniform background would serve the product better. place a light on the either side behind the subject pointed to the background to provide the uniformity and get the background whity white. study richard avadon's portait lighting style.
Another small thing is the visibility of wayward strands of hair. Her hair was not neatly put together. Time to have a small chat with your hair stylist.
hope it helps. by the way... pretty model.
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| Photo By: prashant bhat
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Critique By:
Mihir Shah (K:837)
6/2/2007 7:36:08 AM
Nice shot, sharp through out and well captured. I like the composition of the poolside, but unfortunatly the grey building in the background is quite distracting and quite a contrast.
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| Photo By: prashant bhat
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Critique By:
Mihir Shah (K:837)
9/30/2006 5:48:48 PM
email me at mailmihir@gmail.com and i will reply with my contact detials.
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| Photo By: Mihir Shah
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Critique By:
Mihir Shah (K:837)
9/28/2006 3:55:17 PM
hi pankaj, i am really sorry i cant touchbase, i have moved back to bombay. i used to live at jersey. i dont know any members there, but then i am sure there are loads of them. let me know if u need any info. have a great time. nyc is a great place to be in.
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Critique By:
Mihir Shah (K:837)
9/11/2006 7:18:33 PM
mark..it going to be your fault for making many of us helpless usefilm users fall in love with becky. absolutely excellent capture.
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Critique By:
Mihir Shah (K:837)
9/11/2006 7:03:31 PM
good observation...really like the golden carpet which is at stark contrast to the a very bland sky...both together give life to your subjects...nice picture.
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| Photo By: Pankaj Arora
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Critique By:
Mihir Shah (K:837)
9/11/2006 7:00:25 PM
most critical part inshots like these is choosing the right depth of field...nice work pankaj.
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Critique By:
Mihir Shah (K:837)
9/11/2006 6:56:49 PM
very nice composition, pankaj...for me what really makes the picture is the background which forms nice bluish vertical bands to complement the iron rod/window pane. nice work.
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Critique By:
Mihir Shah (K:837)
3/21/2006 10:42:52 AM
thanks garima...
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| Photo By: Mihir Shah
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Critique By:
Mihir Shah (K:837)
3/21/2006 10:41:29 AM
thank you sebastian. yes i would have liked more dOf too.
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Critique By:
Mihir Shah (K:837)
7/27/2005 2:48:54 PM
thanx for the comment pankaj, nice to see you back. been out myself for a long time. looking forward to your pics.
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Critique By:
Mihir Shah (K:837)
7/27/2005 2:42:51 PM
though the composition is nice, but imo the yellow/black boat in the background is distracting, takes attention away from our lonely boat. very nice colour contrast and saturations.
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Critique By:
Mihir Shah (K:837)
7/27/2005 2:38:04 PM
as usual.. excellent composition makes one follow the footsteps into the frame and then walking out of it with the guy, very effective as a panaromic.
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Critique By:
Mihir Shah (K:837)
7/27/2005 2:34:11 PM
excellent grain. its the grain which brings this photo to life, an extreme fine grain would have made it look like a plain shot. Ken is right, picture deserves recognition.
nice shot pankaj, did you develop it yourself?
your b/w work is really nice.
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Critique By:
Mihir Shah (K:837)
7/25/2005 12:56:29 AM
hi kaeli,very nice composition, really like the range of tones captured.overall a classic shot, very well excecuted.
just one question, can you pls explain the lighting set up and the source. cannot help but be curious abt 5 min exposure and the technique used.
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Critique By:
Mihir Shah (K:837)
7/24/2005 3:50:56 PM
hey prashant, here is the ps'd version. all i did was use the simple burn feature. Well i am not that well versed to photoshop, but i am sure many others could do a million times better job then this.
But overall i just wanted to reduce the amount of cathlight in her eyes. i hope this helps.
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| Photo By: prashant bhat
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Critique By:
Mihir Shah (K:837)
7/21/2005 9:25:02 PM
nice portrait, i like the way it is composed, maybe IMO a little more frame was needed on the right hand side of the frame or if that wasnt possible, i would prefer eye contact.
exposure is spot on. nice work ben, your portfolio is excellent. my compliments.
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Critique By:
Mihir Shah (K:837)
7/21/2005 8:57:29 PM
excellent contrast and grain.
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| Photo By: Mark Julian
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Critique By:
Mihir Shah (K:837)
7/21/2005 8:55:38 PM
her expression is priceless. makes you think abt your thoughts and makes you wonder abt her story. raisies a lot of questions. mark..wonderful shot, been through your portfolio...so far it has been avery nice journey. glad to have stumbled upon it.
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Critique By:
Mihir Shah (K:837)
7/21/2005 8:52:17 PM
a very pupl fiction kind of shot, well composed and i like the tones. very nice mark.
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Critique By:
Mihir Shah (K:837)
7/21/2005 8:50:21 PM
nice story mark, without the story, wouldnt know how you came abt the title 'melon girl'. well i believe you were just right to help any damsel in call of help.
i hear the melons in caribbean are amazing. anyways nice grab shot.
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Critique By:
Mihir Shah (K:837)
7/21/2005 8:44:32 PM
what a great street shot, i like the way the picture captures the spirit of his perfomance. very nice image.
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Critique By:
Mihir Shah (K:837)
7/21/2005 8:39:15 PM
right time to shoot metal. excellent look and great colours. and i like gravity too.
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