|
|
Critique By:
Marc Volovic (K:425)
6/23/2009 4:30:37 PM
Very good play with colours and background.
I think her head is somewhat over-tilted to the right.
|
Photo By: Clay Boutin
(K:28722)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Marc Volovic (K:425)
7/14/2004 12:50:35 PM
Excellently done - good composure, good use of light.
Great work.
M
|
Photo By: Lilywhite Lilith
(K:1809)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Marc Volovic (K:425)
7/11/2004 6:58:20 PM
Teunis, thanks foryour comment.
I am always seeking a way to emulate your vibrant colour ;-) - I think I (by underexposing half a stop) have more or less found a way to so do...
|
Photo By: Marc Volovic
(K:425)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Marc Volovic (K:425)
4/17/2004 3:52:11 PM
Great work, Teunis.
I am slightly less fond of this one than of much of your other work - the yellow pestle of the flower is swallowed by the yellow petals - making it less attractive.
Of course, it is the flower's fault...
As usual, your DOF is bloody amazing!
|
Photo By: Teunis Haveman
(K:37426)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Marc Volovic (K:425)
4/17/2004 3:49:04 PM
Thanks for the comment...
I did not want to process the shot (other than cropping it) - this is what my lens could do ;-)... But saturation is a good idea. I will underexpose by half a stop on the next one...
Thanks!
|
Photo By: Marc Volovic
(K:425)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Marc Volovic (K:425)
3/13/2004 11:11:47 AM
Protea!
|
Photo By: Marc Volovic
(K:425)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Marc Volovic (K:425)
3/13/2004 8:41:28 AM
Amazing capture, the little girl with her slender wisps of hair and the threatening... what is it? Fire? Sun? Some force of nature...
Wonderful!
|
Photo By: MUAMMER YANMAZ
(K:4)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Marc Volovic (K:425)
3/13/2004 8:37:11 AM
What a lovely portrait - the tied hair, the smile - you captured this young woman so perfectly.
Great job.
|
Photo By: Diana Cornelissen
(K:26437)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Marc Volovic (K:425)
3/13/2004 7:44:47 AM
Ah, the usual Haveman beauty.
How do you find these perfect flowers? How do you photograph them?
You must write a book on flower macro photography...
|
Photo By: Teunis Haveman
(K:37426)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Marc Volovic (K:425)
3/12/2004 10:27:53 AM
Hi Teunis.
What an amazing level of detail - a shot wirthy of a Haveman ;-).
Your ability to bring out both colours and detail never cease to amaze me. Composition is wonderous.
Ah, such flowers.
Now, one problem with the photograph - what about the scent? You forgot the scent ;-).
|
Photo By: Teunis Haveman
(K:37426)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Marc Volovic (K:425)
2/19/2004 9:23:33 PM
Thank you so much, Teunis. I am simply trying to emulate your colours in the picture ;-).
You produce such beautiful colours that I want to emulate them ;-).
Thanks for the example!
M
|
Photo By: Marc Volovic
(K:425)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Marc Volovic (K:425)
12/27/2003 8:11:25 AM
From the thumbnail, I thought it was an umbrella ;-) or a daffodil.
What beautiful waterYou have a wonderful eye, I really want to be there, near that waterball. Ah, how beautiful you make everything.
M
|
Photo By: Teunis Haveman
(K:37426)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Marc Volovic (K:425)
12/27/2003 8:07:39 AM
Excellent portrait - good composition, good crop, focusing the attention on the woman's face. Extremely well done.
M
|
Photo By: Czarny Kwadrat
(K:100)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Marc Volovic (K:425)
11/27/2003 3:18:43 PM
Amazing colours.
So very peaceful, so tranquil. One almost hears the surf's whisper.
Great work!
M
|
Photo By: Teunis Haveman
(K:37426)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Marc Volovic (K:425)
11/16/2003 11:51:59 AM
A wonderful sky. Almost chinese, in the composition.
|
Photo By: Teunis Haveman
(K:37426)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Marc Volovic (K:425)
11/16/2003 10:49:29 AM
Thank you all. Indeed beautiful colours. It was amazing inside.
Naty - the bottom, in my opnion, somewhat anchors the colours...
|
Photo By: Marc Volovic
(K:425)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Marc Volovic (K:425)
11/15/2003 10:18:36 AM
Thanks for the comment, Tony.
Actually, I was looking for the multiple reflection to converge with the smoke from the smokestack - that is why I was shooting through a closed window.
As for more of the foreground, yes, I have quite a bit of THAT, cropped off in this version of the photo.
I will try posting another version with more foreground...
Marc
|
Photo By: Marc Volovic
(K:425)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Marc Volovic (K:425)
11/15/2003 9:25:05 AM
Light at the end of the tunnel?
A very nice shot... what a lovely place.
|
Photo By: Teunis Haveman
(K:37426)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Marc Volovic (K:425)
11/12/2003 2:03:41 PM
Great and humourous idea. Good work with the composition and the light. Good photo!
|
Photo By: Francesco Martini
(K:12249)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Marc Volovic (K:425)
10/12/2003 3:04:27 PM
What is it? It looks like a shrimp-coloured mushroom raised in a cooking utensil - beautiful colours in an industrial format.
Quite a weird photo - I am not sure if it attracts or repulses... Weird...
|
Photo By: Teunis Haveman
(K:37426)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Marc Volovic (K:425)
9/26/2003 9:48:36 PM
A very atractive illustration/photograph.
it reqminds me of pictures by Beardley - those of the arthurian romances. Percival? One of the effeminate knights? Very intense effect.
Marc
|
Photo By: volker goerschen
(K:1634)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Marc Volovic (K:425)
9/15/2003 7:26:57 AM
Beautiful colours. Focus is slightly too soft...
Marc
|
Photo By: E Karlsson
(K:5)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Marc Volovic (K:425)
9/13/2003 11:40:36 AM
Ah - this is quite lovely. I think I will steal this idea from you, ig you but allow it ;-)...
Marc
|
Photo By: Samuel Downs
(K:7290)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Marc Volovic (K:425)
9/13/2003 11:39:52 AM
A very interesting effect - what is it? Quicksilver?
Marc
|
Photo By: Getulio Melo
(K:6481)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Marc Volovic (K:425)
9/10/2003 9:17:26 AM
Thanks for the comment - I am using the flowers to train myself ;-). After all, originality is well and good, but I better know how to execute. ;-)
|
Photo By: Marc Volovic
(K:425)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Marc Volovic (K:425)
9/7/2003 5:42:27 AM
Great idea and a very colourful execution.
|
Photo By: Kaj Nielsen
(K:15279)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Marc Volovic (K:425)
9/6/2003 11:05:09 AM
Very good DoF and great colours.
Good work!
M
|
Photo By: Keith Kihn
(K:89)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Marc Volovic (K:425)
9/6/2003 1:17:58 AM
Great shot, as you well know ;-)...
Thanks for sharing!
|
Photo By: ferran compte
(K:0)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Marc Volovic (K:425)
9/5/2003 9:42:23 AM
Great work - very beautiful detail.
The transluscency is superb!
M
|
Photo By: Kaj Nielsen
(K:15279)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Marc Volovic (K:425)
9/4/2003 5:59:15 AM
Amazing!
|
Photo By: Frank Ogle
(K:46)
|
|