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Critique By:
j ruz (K:1043)
1/11/2005 5:12:49 PM
sweet. so the vignetting is natural? i have come across a polaroid 800 Land Camera and i'm excited to try it out. do you know the best place to get "film" for it? nice work, Stephen.
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| Photo By: Stephen Laszlo
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Critique By:
j ruz (K:1043)
9/18/2004 5:41:57 PM
freaky! i like it! the foliage in the second image does look better, but the first does add more of a mood. did she stand in place for a second? how did she show up in one spot if she was running?
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| Photo By: matthew hoffman
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Critique By:
j ruz (K:1043)
9/18/2004 5:38:41 PM
great location for this shot! all the arrows really give to the sense of movement. i might suggest next time cropping out more of the sky. brighter areas draw the eye. good light blur. also, great choice of time to shoot.
thank you for all your comments on my images. (c:,'
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| Photo By: matthew hoffman
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Critique By:
j ruz (K:1043)
9/18/2004 5:58:36 AM
nice mood, but not interesting enough arrangement. power lines detract. maybe if you found a better angle, preferably closer to the truck and house, it would much improve. hard to tell if you wanted to lines and are conditioners in the shot or not.
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| Photo By: matthew hoffman
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Critique By:
j ruz (K:1043)
9/18/2004 5:54:49 AM
very clever. The rings, not the women, are the tokens.
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| Photo By: Heifetz Zhou
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Critique By:
j ruz (K:1043)
12/7/2003 12:50:31 PM
hoo
r
yoo
woodint
aye
lyk
2
noe
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| Photo By: Cherie Marion
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Critique By:
j ruz (K:1043)
11/13/2003 9:34:59 PM
hmm, i saw Ryan's comment and it got me to thinking. perhaps it would help if you used a polarizer to cut the glare. that might simplify it and perhaps make it look more like a canyon! (c:,'
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Photo By: Harlan Heald
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Critique By:
j ruz (K:1043)
11/13/2003 9:31:41 PM
sometimes, the things you don't want to happen are exactly the things you need. (c:,'
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| Photo By: Sandra Berry
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Critique By:
j ruz (K:1043)
11/13/2003 9:30:18 PM
nice. very cute. i might suggest cropping off most of the left side, so he/she isn't looking out of the pic so much. (c:,'
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| Photo By: Sandra Berry
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Critique By:
j ruz (K:1043)
11/13/2003 9:27:48 PM
oh how we love the moon! and oh how hard it is to capture it. one thing you might try if you want to get up close: if you have a telescope and plenty of patience, align your camera lens with the eyepiece of the telescope that's aimed at the moon, and snap! i've gotten a couple good shots that way. have fun! (C:,'
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| Photo By: Carla Sie
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Critique By:
j ruz (K:1043)
11/13/2003 9:24:43 PM
divine light
sacred mountain
holy land
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| Photo By: Barbara Bremigan
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Critique By:
j ruz (K:1043)
11/13/2003 4:53:43 PM
a nice idea. However, i feel you should lighten up the image and move the selective focus towards the foreground. and perhaps move the qoute up just a tad. great quote, by the way! (c:,'
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| Photo By: Josh Fields
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Critique By:
j ruz (K:1043)
11/13/2003 4:49:07 PM
the fact that you title it "Canyon" takes it to another level. a great study of the world of macro. (c:,'
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| Photo By: Harlan Heald
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Critique By:
j ruz (K:1043)
10/23/2003 10:25:30 PM
Nice composition. I wish it was a little sharper, though. (c:,'
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| Photo By: Morgan Elliott
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Critique By:
j ruz (K:1043)
10/23/2003 10:23:17 PM
the frost holds secrets
that even the trees cannot hear
only the orb knows how
to pierce the crystals
light begets water
water begets life
and it goes on
in time...in time...
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| Photo By: Michael Alexander
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Critique By:
j ruz (K:1043)
10/7/2003 9:45:30 PM
nice image! great colors and wide angle. i might suggest croppig out the objects at the top as they distract from the rest of the image, i feel. thanks for your comment on one of my images, Thom! (c:,'
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| Photo By: Thom Stevenson
(K:132)
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Critique By:
j ruz (K:1043)
10/6/2003 11:57:19 AM
Sexy?! what are you talking about?! does just showing a lot of leg make it sexy? i don't see it. this is just too wierd. what is she doing to that pole? if you're exploring the implications of human sexuality, it might make more sense. otherwise, the image is just too nebulous and out there.
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| Photo By: Jytte Kristensen
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Critique By:
j ruz (K:1043)
10/6/2003 11:48:06 AM
whoa! how'd he get up there?! great image! the mood is fantastic. i would prefer those power lines at the bottom to be excluded. nice work, Eddie! (c:,'
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| Photo By: Eddie O'Bryan
(K:0)
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Critique By:
j ruz (K:1043)
10/5/2003 8:27:30 PM
a time of dreary days
when i make my own bright promise
but it flys
it all flys and becomes as blurry
as indecipherable as a delusion
i must return to get it back
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| Photo By: Dr@gon's Baby
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Critique By:
j ruz (K:1043)
10/3/2003 12:00:48 PM
romantic, but the subjects are too dark to be against a completely black background. congrats to the newlyweds. (c:,'
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| Photo By: John Hatziemmanouil
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Critique By:
j ruz (K:1043)
10/3/2003 11:58:46 AM
ummm...tad bit freaky. but then again, animate models are used the same as Blythe. (c:,'
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| Photo By: edmond lisy
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Critique By:
j ruz (K:1043)
9/30/2003 11:27:46 AM
The lighting is great, but i would say the shot is not really working as a whole. if the wine bottle is the subject, it is too small and off-center to be affective. my eye can't quite determine if this is a scenic shot or an advertisement. in this kind of photo, simplicity is key. keep on working on it. (c:,'
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| Photo By: Arda Guldogan
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Critique By:
j ruz (K:1043)
9/23/2003 5:58:06 PM
'tis a nice view but i believe waiting for better lighting would have dramatically improved the image. however, i know this is not always an option. another suggestion: the light appears to be coming in from stage-left. using a polarizer and/or shooting at right angles to the sun would deepen the color of the sky and improve contrast (polarizer). Keep on posting, Brian! (c:,'
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| Photo By: Brian Schneider
(K:313)
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Critique By:
j ruz (K:1043)
9/23/2003 5:48:02 PM
listen
ben speaks
of a time
before smoke-webbed skies
when the ring-around-the-rosie
was heavier than the atom
(c:,'
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| Photo By: Amitava Banerjea
(K:7088)
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Critique By:
j ruz (K:1043)
9/23/2003 12:48:20 PM
fantastic! the colors are drop-dead striking! any filters? message clearly stated and understood! amazing, Iwona!!! (c:,'
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| Photo By: Iwona Kowalczyk
(K:45)
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Critique By:
j ruz (K:1043)
9/23/2003 12:44:47 PM
'tis time to let go my child
you reflect the world's light in your eye
but the earth needs you too much
to stay summited on me
(c:,'
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| Photo By: Stuart Boyle
(K:1505)
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Critique By:
j ruz (K:1043)
9/14/2003 7:27:17 PM
very good, but i would like to see some more DOF. my eye initially goes to the whole mask because of what appears to be a strong expression, but ends up on the tip of the nose. the entire mask doesn't have to be in focus but some more DOF would improve, i think, the overall feeling. (c:,'
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| Photo By: lowell whipple girbes
(K:13151)
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Critique By:
j ruz (K:1043)
9/4/2003 1:16:58 PM
i played
but your ears heard nothing
fine
strike me now
for i would rather have cold steel
fused to my flesh
than your
abandon
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| Photo By: Lissa Hatcher
(K:3006)
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Critique By:
j ruz (K:1043)
8/29/2003 3:54:41 PM
HA HA HA HA! oh this is great! children never cease to amaze (or amuse) me! Great portrait, Kim! (c:,'
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| Photo By: Kim Dodge
(K:109)
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Critique By:
j ruz (K:1043)
8/29/2003 3:51:18 PM
Bonjour, Michel! This is beautiful! just like most of your butterfly and flower shots! spectacular. the detail and color are great! (c:,'
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| Photo By: Michel Bordeleau
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