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Critique By:
Rui Palha (K:13624)
4/2/2003 1:26:25 AM
Very expressive and natural street moment.
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| Photo By: Denzil Brown
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Critique By:
Kim Culbert (K:37070)
11/21/2002 1:10:13 PM
I think B&W works nicely for this as well, letting us see the texture without the barrage of colours. Do you have an editing software program, such as Photoshop? In the top left there is someone else's foot (or something!) peeking in, and I think this would be a better image if it wasn't there. It draws my eye up into the corner and away from the feet.
All in all, I think this image has a lot of power and you should be proud of it!
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| Photo By: Denzil Brown
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Critique By:
favati lucesio (K:3)
11/16/2002 5:08:38 AM
so beautiful, you are very lucky to get this!
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| Photo By: Denzil Brown
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Critique By:
Denzil Brown (K:201)
10/31/2002 1:18:29 PM
Thanks for the comments, Sue. I didn't expect any comments and especially so soon.
Well I didn't use anything to enhance the picture quality. I used a Fuji color print film(can't remember which one) and I have no technical data on the shot - I should start taking notes. I wasn't even thinking about filters at that point in time, but now I am experimenting with them. I will revisit this spot in Central Park's botanical garden, this time with slide film and a polarizer - thanks for the idea. And do feel free to play around with the pic, I can only learn more. Thanks again.
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| Photo By: Denzil Brown
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Critique By:
Sue O'S (K:12878)
10/30/2002 8:06:23 PM
Oops! I think I balanced in a little too much yellow. She looks jaunticed now. Sorry.
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Critique By:
Sue O'S (K:12878)
10/30/2002 8:04:45 PM
Denzil, I have to say that the composition is very nice. I certainly sense the joy you mentioned and you show enough of the rest of the statue to suggest a ring of children (nymphs?) playing in a ring. I really like this.
You don't mention if you used any filters and I don't know what film you used. I played with this in Photoshop a little to remove some of the blue and add a little red and green to warm it up. Hope you don't mind my playing about.
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