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Critique By:
Luke Luther (K:14693)
9/20/2005 9:37:45 PM
Judi, you captured such intensity here. There is a sense of determination in her face. The lighting is as usual characteristically glowing and flattering. Excellent work!
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| Photo By: Judi Liosatos
(K:34047)
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Critique By:
Luke Luther (K:14693)
9/20/2005 10:48:25 AM
just looking at the TN was enough to complete the story. a pensive woman unaware of her surroundings. characteristically great focus and wonderful display of emotion captured in image.
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| Photo By: Claude Tenot
(K:9960)
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Critique By:
Luke Luther (K:14693)
9/20/2005 10:46:06 AM
Pawel. what a surprise that more of your visitors have chosen not to comment on this golden beauty. a glamor shot with slight soft focus on her face. main focal point seems to be on the seductively exposed shoulder. wonderful work.
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| Photo By: Pawel Topolski
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Critique By:
Luke Luther (K:14693)
9/20/2005 10:44:01 AM
a cute snapshot Thilo. subject is interesting. the flare from flash (maybe) is a tiny distraction. i think this might have been better from an angle and tighter on the bear. i love the car.
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| Photo By: Thilo Bayer
(K:50358)
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Critique By:
Luke Luther (K:14693)
9/20/2005 10:41:33 AM
a strong image. a bit soft on the face, but definitely a keeper.
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| Photo By: Andrew Caldwell
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Critique By:
Luke Luther (K:14693)
9/20/2005 1:20:04 AM
Here is a color-corrected version of the same image, Thilo. I liked the former because of the strange water color like color cast.
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| Photo By: Luke Luther
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Critique By:
Luke Luther (K:14693)
9/18/2005 6:23:26 AM
flat maybe and two dimensions for sure but very well exectuted. the combination of lines and contours is exciting. the textures are engrossing and lead the eye around the image.
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| Photo By: Thilo Bayer
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Critique By:
Luke Luther (K:14693)
9/17/2005 12:43:08 PM
..de la fin, Claude. Merci.
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| Photo By: Luke Luther
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Critique By:
Luke Luther (K:14693)
9/17/2005 12:42:09 PM
Clifton, it is located on the Minneapolis campus of the University of Minnesota. Looks out over the Mississippi River.
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| Photo By: Luke Luther
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Critique By:
Luke Luther (K:14693)
9/17/2005 12:40:13 PM
Djordje, you are right. He is the architect.
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| Photo By: Luke Luther
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Critique By:
Luke Luther (K:14693)
9/17/2005 2:16:17 AM
contemplative! fantastique! simplement belle!
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| Photo By: Claude Tenot
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Critique By:
Luke Luther (K:14693)
9/16/2005 6:02:09 PM
This is so peaceful and well-composed! Excellent work!
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| Photo By: Barry Wakelin
(K:7838)
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Critique By:
Luke Luther (K:14693)
9/16/2005 3:30:57 PM
Exactly what Diego said. The eyes reflect the beautiful light. I also like the very close crop.
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| Photo By: Marta Azevedo
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Critique By:
Luke Luther (K:14693)
9/16/2005 12:10:12 PM
Red is good. It provokes and excites. Did you use gels or boost saturation? It is an image that does not have much contrast, yet can maintain interest. I like the yellow/green/gold color streak in the left upper corner. Nice work. Red would be a great theme/project!
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| Photo By: Marion Luijten
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Critique By:
Luke Luther (K:14693)
9/15/2005 4:46:14 PM
true to the title. it is minimal but still quite impactful. the saturation in the lower portion is incredible. this is how i see things like this as well. it stirs the emotions.
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| Photo By: Carmem A. Busko
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Critique By:
Luke Luther (K:14693)
9/15/2005 4:43:11 PM
Thanks, Carmem. Tell me what you do not like about the focus. Too sharp! Not enough DOF? I ask so that I can understand.
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| Photo By: Luke Luther
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Critique By:
Luke Luther (K:14693)
9/14/2005 10:00:55 AM
So blue, so seductive those eyes. So well composed. This is the subject.
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| Photo By: Judi Liosatos
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Critique By:
Luke Luther (K:14693)
9/14/2005 12:45:01 AM
Looking like the hands of the robot from The Day the Earth Stood Still. Interesting graphic abstract, Thilo. I like it because the eyes can wander between the two objects. Like the lighting, especially on the front finger.
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| Photo By: Thilo Bayer
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Critique By:
Luke Luther (K:14693)
9/13/2005 12:45:37 AM
What a beautiful portrait! Creative lighting; excellent composition.
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| Photo By: Pawel Topolski
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Critique By:
Luke Luther (K:14693)
9/11/2005 12:12:18 PM
Oh I agree with you. This is so perfect in color and shape and form. Great use of the negative space as well. Did you know you have a visitor in your image? I think it completes it.
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| Photo By: Brad Morris
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Critique By:
Luke Luther (K:14693)
9/11/2005 12:10:54 PM
Dramatic lighting. Crystal sharp focus. Great subject matter with perfect DOF. Nice treatment overall. Good perspective. Winner!
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| Photo By: Carmem A. Busko
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Critique By:
Luke Luther (K:14693)
9/11/2005 12:05:25 PM
We will have to come up with a new category - skyscapes for your colorful and dramatic captures of the an almost forgotten portion of our environment. What a beautiful composition, Judi!
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| Photo By: Judi Liosatos
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Critique By:
Luke Luther (K:14693)
9/9/2005 1:01:33 PM
Great composition; grain is a welcome addition to the image. Nice work!
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| Photo By: Mark Orchard
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Critique By:
Luke Luther (K:14693)
9/9/2005 12:33:40 AM
I like it Thilo. You did a bang up job on straightening the shore line.
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| Photo By: Luke Luther
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Critique By:
Luke Luther (K:14693)
9/8/2005 7:26:33 PM
Thilo, I appreciate your comment. I thought about straightening the line but was concerned it might alter the skyview too much. Suggestions welcome?
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| Photo By: Luke Luther
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Critique By:
Luke Luther (K:14693)
9/8/2005 1:11:00 PM
Nice story as narrative to an already interesting image.
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| Photo By: Judi Liosatos
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Critique By:
Luke Luther (K:14693)
9/6/2005 6:54:12 AM
Thank you Thilo. It is those small details that make or break an image. I do not have the best film/slide scanner and have elected to go to DSLR instead. I appreciate your concise and helpful comments.
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| Photo By: Luke Luther
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Critique By:
Luke Luther (K:14693)
9/5/2005 7:22:17 PM
My first visit to your portfolio. I came because of the Donor recs. Am surprised by the subtle quality of your work. Do not leave...UF is going through some changes but all will settle soon. Luke
This is fun and entertaining. Almost like looking from a quiet hiding place and observing her. Great compositions with the massive columns.
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| Photo By: Thilo Bayer
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Critique By:
Luke Luther (K:14693)
9/5/2005 2:20:49 PM
What a beautiful old truck, Paul. Is it a metaphor for the state of this union? Rusty, in need of some serious maintenance? All imagery aside, I concur that we have been too busy taking care of business and forgetting our infrastructure - the very things that have made us great. Time to get out the tools and start fixing what we have. Excellent photo and sharp commentary.
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Photo By: Paul Lara
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Critique By:
Luke Luther (K:14693)
9/5/2005 3:24:49 AM
Thanks everyone. Imagine my surprise when I saw the beautiful slide. It is even more detailed than you could imagine. The scan does not do it justice. Luke
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