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Jim Budrakey
{K:24393} 11/29/2005
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Eye catching, if you'll pardon the (more or less intentional) pun :-). Very dramatic - even the thumbnail jumped right out at me. Jim's point is well taken but I think it depends upon what you intend to do with the shot. If you expect the viewer to dwell on it a long time then perhaps the iris and pupil need more attention. If the intention of this shot is to draw a viewer in (into an advertisement for example) then I like it as is. Excellent work.
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Mary Brown
{K:71879} 11/29/2005
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This is a very unique presentation. Neat picture.
Mary
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Mohsen Bayramnejad
{K:21377} 11/29/2005
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oh very nice shot...Love this artistic work!
a fine abstract composition! Bravo!
Cheers,
Mohsen
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George Black
{K:102014} 11/28/2005
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This is really sophisticated stuff--and very impressive. Jim makes a good point about the blending of the iris and pupil, but it's hard to fault something this complicated that comes off so very well. Good job!
--George
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Jim Goldstein
{K:21230} 11/28/2005
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Fun macro. I don't mind the B&W conversion, but the eye is too black for my taste. The iris and pupil blend into each other and the allure of the eye is lost as a result. Perhaps masking this area and doing a seperate B&W treatment would provide a creative alternative to present this image.
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