Hi Leanne, I love the close up detail of the centre bits and the DOF, quite well done. The lighting is a bit varied and should have been shaded, to enable fill in flash to bring out the textures of the petals evenly. Attention to background detail to eliminate the fence, as in adding a bit of plant foliage etc helps.I assume you are using a tripod and telephoto with macro if available. It really pays, when you have a subject with this much detail, to choose the time of day to get the light right, e.g. late afternoon. Ian Pearson