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Eduard Nikoliqi
{K:556} 4/15/2005
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Nice portrait Bjorn. I wish it was more sharp though, considering the Canon 50 mm f/1.8 II lens.
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Luc VN
{K:-1816} 11/29/2004
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Great capture, but I would have erased the pimples a bit with Photoshop. You would have enhanced it a lot! Otherwise great expression capture!
Rgds, Luc VN
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Davide Marchi
{K:9196} 11/5/2004
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Leggermente sfocata... ma la modella è molto naturale, ciao Davide
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Franco Giovanella
{K:132} 10/22/2004
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linda! pena que a sombra no rosto e o desfoque atrapalharam!!! abraço amigo!
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Rob Ernsting
{K:8899} 10/13/2004
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BJorn, this is a nice portrait and the pose is good. But with a 50mm 1,8 lens I expect much more calrity and sharpness.
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Elangovan S
{K:10675} 10/12/2004
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Bjorn, I see you are doing great with your portraits shoot with your models. Here I thought I would highlight some points...
Very nice & beautiful model. You have very nice soft bg here. Nice pose going on here.
I think there is no point in the picture is in the sharp focus (maybe the front arm?). Her eyes need to be absolute focus.
Point 2, the light... you chose the light from the side, which causes some shadows... maybe some diffuser could have been used or open shade would be better off here. Because of the side light also, it enhances the pimple on her for head. Watch out for that.
3rd, the models right ear (left for the viewer), peeking out a bit, if you are going for 2/3rd face try not get the 2nd ear like that.
Well... you are also saying this is a fashion picture, are all these allowed in there? I m not sure how the fashion thingy work, though, :-)
Keep shooting and have fun. How are things at personal front? HOpe things are better now.
Elangs.
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Stefan Rohner
{K:4200} 10/12/2004
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nice photo, but I cant see what it has to do with Avedon, maybe you should look at his work, best regards Stefan
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CorrieLynn Jacobsen
{K:9882} 10/12/2004
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beautiful portrait!
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B:)liana
{K:30945} 10/12/2004
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Nice model dear! but kinda her eyes are out of focus? no?
Kisses, Biliana
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