To be sure, the object used as a theme is unclear in a screen.
Although the theme was the blue of a flat sky. However, space composition was bad all. I think that erection structure will be taken in more carefully next time.
Thank you. your advice became study very much!! Study, study and study.
I always express my feeling directly,since I know a little Japanese,I commented you by means of it,in this picture,I can't find the main object,the lamp?the masion?Or the tree?Maybe a erect frame could be better