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Mohammad Reza Shahrokhi Nejad
{K:7396} 5/30/2004
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Nice.
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Pedro Libório
{K:53861} 5/22/2004
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fantastic composition, light, perspective!!!
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Daniel Bard
{K:627} 5/21/2004
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the only comment i have is none. i only have a question how does one get started in fashion photography. i would like a reply please. skate_84@hotmail.com
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Kim Taylor
{K:2816} 5/19/2004
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Well, I had to reduce the size to actually see the photo as a whole and I must say that cropping it down to the essentials... the butt and thong... would still leave that distracting floor so you should re-shoot it on white ;-)
No I'm kidding, it's a good photo. A fashion/editorial shot has to hold the viewer for more than a half second, and it can do that by a couple of ways. Sex is one, a good story is another and this one has both. We know the sex part since the wide-angle lens distortion has caused the doorway to act as a triangle, running our eye down to the open pose and the blue thong on the thirds mark. The story? Well we've just come home (there's our car in the driveway) and find that someone is taking a nap in the sun and fresh air like a cat... Well OK the story's about sex too.
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A Brito
{K:10699} 5/19/2004
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excellent !
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Les Perry
{K:319} 5/19/2004
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mmmm To busy for me too. I find the impact improved and more to my liking if the top is cropped down to just below the top of the railing so the middle of the door frame furthest away in the picture is on the edge of the frame, which still gives a good feel of depth and removes the distracting highlights of the bush and door in the background. Nice idea.
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Afriadi Hikmal
{K:2216} 5/19/2004
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I like your idea,
You have a great imagination.
Regards.
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LaMaro Hall
{K:3658} 5/19/2004
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I like your idea but lets get some things straight. There seems to be a little bit of too much of everything in this. I like the idea of the candles but lets get them stright or parallel to each other. Another thing there is too much of the outside on the inside. It dominates the whole entire picture detracting from the pretty women you have displayed. In other words I think a shot like this would work in a less crowded surrounding. I would also try it at dusk or at nightfall with the candles lit and bringing more attention to the pretty lady. Good Luck...
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