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Sue O'S
{K:12878} 11/14/2002
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Hi, George,
The colors are marvelous on this (I'm a sucker for violet flowers)! I agree with Lee about the crop and the DOF. I'm also a little "bugged" by the shadow across the large leaves to the right.
Hope you don't mind but I did a quick crop which I feel simplifies the image a little.
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Lee Horn
{K:256} 11/14/2002
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I find this flower to be a lovely subject but the background is so busy it draws the eye away from ther main focus. Your actual focus appears somewhat soft on this and I might suggest the rule of thirds with this and not have the flower or any subject matter directly centered.
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Anne E. M. Zang
{K:4135} 11/14/2002
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You certainly got that one flower in detail. However, there are so many interesting shapes and elements to this composition that I almost feel like the flower in the middle is taking away from that a bit. I think this would look nice with a softer focus or filter, complimenting both foreground and background.
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Anne E. M. Zang
{K:4135} 11/14/2002
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You certainly got that one flower in detail. However, there are so many interesting shapes and elements to this composition that I almost feel like the flower in the middle is taking away from that a bit. I think this would look nice with a softer focus or filter, complimenting both foreground and background.
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