a little over the top, does not seem to have the impact you are going for, i think the facial expression is not sincere enough, thats my got reaction at a first look.
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B:)liana {K:30945} 12/2/2003
No, my dear Photo Friend, I was not disappointed by your comment, cause I now for the empty space. but here, on your photograph, something is distracting me. I cannot find something to catch me on. the difference between this two photos is so huge, but in overall love the idea. but I am quite disturbe with it. but it was your intention, my dear, so it is a very good provocative photo, but I would insert it differently, maybe you have to make the background more darker?! Just a thought. no bad feelings, my dear friend, cause your photographs are unique. All the best to you, dear Gerhard, and a kiss for the Friendship. I am honest and want other to be honest with me too. You have seen that I have commented a lot of your photographs, cause I appreciate your work. Kind regards, and have a nice shooting day. Biliana
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B:)liana {K:30945} 12/2/2003
Here also my dear you have too much empty space for such a little head. but nice idea. and the head is not properly merge inside the other photo. looks really unnatural ;-) thank you, BIliana
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