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Ray Witter
{K:6149} 10/24/2003
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Amna, Wonderful image of the girl, Terrible background, can't do much with the background, its really blown out. So, why not get rid of the background and lighten up the girl a little. See below. Just some random thoughts. Ray w.
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druunatic .dk
{K:268} 9/22/2003
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Colours Colours everywhere :O)
Very beatyful pictures :O)
Thanx for your warm welcome :O)
Neel
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Armando Jorge
{K:7937} 9/16/2003
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Beautiful portrait !!
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Rawabi Al-Nuaimi
{K:15659} 9/15/2003
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i guess you're doing the same mistake i do when i photograph something that needs two exposures.. but i came to learn that i should lock the focus on the bright part of the object.. or manually change the exposure so the picture will look less grainy and clearer.. the model is pretty.. i like the composition and the way you've focused in her upper body only.. :)
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Ed
{K:333} 9/15/2003
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Very beautiful.
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John Chiu
{K:6250} 9/15/2003
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A little blurred. Try a tripod or something for a steady support if possible.
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Ural Thunder
{K:74} 9/15/2003
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Very beautiful photo..UT
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Paul's Photos
{K:35235} 9/15/2003
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the outfit is so beautiful.. and she is a beauty :) the low light is probably why the focus is a little off..and there is a shadow on her face.. is it from you..? hope you can take a pic of her in good light!
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Javed Rassi
{K:8223} 9/15/2003
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Good photo but lacks focus, could be your scanning technique.
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Sara M
{K:12411} 9/15/2003
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Amna, why don't you try making the photo in black and white and increase the contrast and the lighting... It might look better.. I think the composition is great, and I can see the girl's beauty... :)
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Teunis Haveman
{K:53426} 9/15/2003
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Beautiful Portrait
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