Last one of this series I think, a more formal outfit with a less formal expression perhaps. Should I have cropped in tighter from the right? Perhaps so. For those who've asked, no she's not on OMP (I am though), she's just starting her career and I do quite a bit of tfp so it worked out. I think she's got a great future, absolutely fearless in front of the camera.
I think there are a few things could have been better in this photograph. Her expression seems like you caught her at an awkward moment. I'm wondering what she is leaning on, as the crop has cut off her hands, and she's directly in the middle of the photo. A rule of third's crop could have been helpful. I think that there was probably a better shot in this set, as I find myself looking at the various aspect of the photo and wanting to see different crops/expressions...keep shooting and the compositions will get better. This is meant as constructive criticism.
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{K:209486} 9/1/2003
