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Petros Stamatakos
{K:12101} 7/15/2003
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Simon, I think that for a first attempt, you've done remarkably well! I do think however, that Davids' suggestions could help your photo a lot. Well, at the very least, it's something you can consider in future.
Keep posting :-)
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Jason Hanson
{K:490} 7/15/2003
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Nice concept you have going here. though i think the shirt is too loud, and several features of her's have been flattened out a bit. though the skin tones look nice. I would have to agree with the others about some side lighting.
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David Chang-Sang
{K:680} 7/14/2003
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Nice model but I'm with Shane with respect to the lighting.
My understanding is that a ring flash is currently a "hot" style with some fashion photographers but I think moving the model a bit so she's away from the background may help with the shadows. I still think side and hairlighting would go great with this shot but I also know that you work with what you have.
Keep at it.
Cheers
Dave
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Shane Gilbert
{K:251} 7/14/2003
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The outline of her shadow is a bit distracting. I think some side lighting would bring out the texture of her clothes and add some depth to her facial features.
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Joe dos Santos
{K:3682} 7/14/2003
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Very good shot. Excellent texture and colours yet her expression. I like the triangle between her arms
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Terry McCully
{K:9221} 7/14/2003
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Backdrop and lighting looks good..I like her expression and her hair.
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