|
Nick Karagiaouroglou
{K:127263} 5/3/2009
|
Thanks a lot for telling me, Andre! Now I understand, and I will second you both.
The fence could perhaps play a role if it covered more of the image, but for this view that centers on the building itself it is too small for fiving some special touch and too big for not disturbing.
Thanks once more!
Nick
|
|
|
Andre Denis
{K:66407} 5/2/2009
|
Hi Nick, The attachment that you did for Jacques is exactly what I meant. Andre
|
|
|
Nick Karagiaouroglou
{K:127263} 4/23/2009
|
Many thanks again, Andre! I really tend to second you in this case. The quick and dirty clone that I attached for Jacques shows (for me) that it would be a better image without the platform.
But what do you mean with "take out the fencing and support poles in the lower right and leave the little reflection in"? To clone only the fence off?
Cheers!
Nick
|
|
|
Nick Karagiaouroglou
{K:127263} 4/23/2009
|
Thanks a lot, Jacques!
The lower right is a bit of a problem to me, as already said.
Nick
|
|
|
Nick Karagiaouroglou
{K:127263} 4/23/2009
|
Thanks a lot Dave!
I have the same impression here too. I cloned the platform (quick and dirty attachment) and it seems to get tighter then.
Cheers!
Nick
|
![](http://thumbs.imageopolis.com/CritiqueImages/3/1/3/3/5/31335/8021824-TN.jpg) Quick and dirty clone of the platform |
|
|
Nick Karagiaouroglou
{K:127263} 4/23/2009
|
Many thanks, Marcio!
Interesting if you don't get disturbed by its presence. I am ambivalent but it is nice to know the different views on that.
Cheers!
Nick
|
|
|
Nick Karagiaouroglou
{K:127263} 4/23/2009
|
Thanks a lot, Saad!
The lower right puzzles me, though.
Nick
|
|
|
Nick Karagiaouroglou
{K:127263} 4/23/2009
|
Thanks a lot Gustavo!
I have the impression that the lower right is a problem, but nonetheless I am glad of you like it.
Cheers!
Nick
|
|
|
Andre Denis
{K:66407} 4/19/2009
|
Hi Nick, Since you ask about the additional platform in the lower right, I would suggest that in this case it might be better to leave it out. If only just to not distract from the design of the building itself. Maybe take out the fencing and support poles in the lower right and leave the little reflection in. Andre
|
|
|
jacques brisebois
{K:73883} 4/14/2009
|
great perspective and composition, very nicely done Nick.
|
|
|
Dave Stacey
{K:150877} 4/13/2009
|
I like your architectural composition, Nick, but I think I would have cropped the lower right corner. Dave.
|
|
|
Marcio Janousek
{K:32538} 4/13/2009
|
The platform at the bottom right is not a disturb.. A good choice in black and white ; very nice abstract.
|
|
|
Saad Salem
{K:89003} 4/13/2009
|
a fine parallel line too,with very good tones, Saad.
|
|
|
Gustavo Scheverin
{K:164501} 4/13/2009
|
Muy bien usados los reflejos, permiten enfatizar el carácter tridimensional de la estructura. Aquí el B&W me parece acertado ya que lo vuelve mas abstracto al edificio y uno puede poner más atención en la geometría y las formas.
Felicitaciones!
|
|