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parehan .K
{K:27453} 10/26/2008
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This type of photos hurts me, it refers to the deep pain in our societies.. thanks for sharing..
parehan
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Erland Pillegaard
{K:34147} 10/25/2008
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Very good portrait
erland
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Maryam Sahafzadeh
{K:3380} 10/23/2008
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Too much title Siamak. regards.
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Billy Bloggs
{K:51043} 10/22/2008
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I like the idea behind this image, there's a sexiness here that is sometimes missing from full face portraits.Covering her eye would certainly be an improvement and add to the mystique. I disagree with Sunset Man about removing the blemishes (though I generally think his version is an improvement), because I prefer a natural looking skin and for this reason the image as a whole is a little too soft for me. Reshoot this and you'll have a winner.
Regards, Gary
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vanessa shakesheff
{K:68840} 10/22/2008
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Lovely portrait ..agree about covering up the eye a bit more..nessa
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aZiZ aBc
{K:28345} 10/22/2008
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so beautiful pose for a portrait, ..
Agree with Sunset Man's edit, ..
Health and Happiness to you and Dana, ..
Aziz
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B B
{K:4346} 10/22/2008
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Nice moody picture.
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Supriyo R. Sarkar
{K:7582} 10/22/2008
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Very nice.
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siamak jafari
{K:20075} 10/22/2008
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perfect,thanks a lot to you.
regards-siamak
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神 風
{K:10665} 10/22/2008
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Hello Siamak,
This portrait has so much mysterious potential so let me try ... Okay?
1. Let's cover up 'her right' eye more.
2. More contrast to 'blacken' what is black.
3. Highlight her face with more light.
4. Put a bit more 'Catch Light' in 'her left' eye.
5. Remove a couple of blemishes in her forehead.
6. 'Presentation Border' to finish it all off with 'Typographical Credits'.
7. New 'title': "SILENTLY LOOKING"
What do you think now? I hope you like what I have done for you.
Be well and thanks for sharing!
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