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Jan Hoffman
{K:39467} 9/7/2008
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Good job with the tone and range with the exception of the foreground subject (a bit blown out). Otherwise the lighting and exposure control work well. Might try burning and/or otherwise adjusting foreground subject.
Very good overall.
--Best to you, Jan
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Darren Arena
{K:2999} 8/31/2008
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Perfect! Thanks you Paul. -Darren-
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Paul Lara
{K:88111} 8/31/2008
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Ok then:
Composition is nice, but I would not have cropped off part of her hand.
Lighting is pretty good, but the lower face is a bit over-exposed.
I think your toning is fairly subtle and well done.
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aZiZ aBc
{K:28345} 8/31/2008
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Excellent, framework and composition, mode and contrast,PoV, ..
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jacques brisebois
{K:73883} 8/30/2008
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a real nice capture, love it.
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Trish McCoy
{K:15897} 8/29/2008
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they are gorgeous. what beautiful poses you have going here.
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Al Ungar
{K:4626} 8/29/2008
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Lighting is a little harsh on the lower girl, but that doesn't bother me as much as cutting off the hand of the upper girl the way you've done it. Also right side might be just a tad tight
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Darren Arena
{K:2999} 8/29/2008
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Hi Ananda! The lighting I used was 2 Softboxes, One high to the right , and one over and behind my left shoulder. Perhaps I metered it wrong as well, but the girl on the bottom has a much lighter complexion than her sister above. Thank you so much for the critique!! -Darren-
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ANANDA NIYOGI
{K:4486} 8/29/2008
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Wonderful framing. I think the light on the face of the girl sitting down is a little harsh. I would guess the light source will be light from the window. Other than that very good composition.
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Carla Pires
{K:10713} 8/29/2008
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Nice models.
Beautiful faces.
Great job. Excellent b/w composition.
Congrats!
CP
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