I'm here after reading your post in the forum asking to have your work "ripped appart"...:-) So I'll be a bit harsh I guess, and won't rate your images, but will tell you what I feel is wrong - or right. I guess you won't mind, and at least I hope so. Let's start with this image.
I don't quite like it, to be frank with you. It is overly ordinary in my opinion. Over-posed if that makes any sense. I see no connection between her dreamy expression and her artificially posed arms. To me, a pose must tell a story, or else it is just that - a pose.
Technically, this image needs a level adjustment. It seems some light got into the lens, as the shadow areas are not as dark as they should be. This may just be a scanning issue, I wouldn't know, but I'm only looking at the result. Best regards.
A friendly advice - always check the underarm. You may have some surprises ;-) (don't worry, it happens frequently - I've seen even a magazine covershot that escaped to the vigilence of the editor).
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