This is technically very good, but I don't like the expression on this face at all (nor the face for that matter). It's quite butch, while having huge feminine eyelashes and bright, sparkling eyes. I find it very difficult to look at such faces without laughing. I understand, though, that this is very trendy, and I'm sure there's a market for it.
I like the cool perfection of beauty here, which while aesthetically pleasing also feels remote and almost mannequin-like. Great light. I like the midrange of tones here.