I think this is trying too hard to be sexy. The relaxed quality is missing, giving the model an even younger apperance. Maybe try not as much light, and use it to give shape and curves. The way it is now seems a bit too broad and conflicts with her pose.
Maybe people were afraid of this one, the model seems a little on the young side (particularly in the thumbnail). I think the photo is great but the shadow on the right side of her face is distracting, I'd like to see more fill there.
Where are the comments and ratings on this ??? ,, Many things make this a great shot, look at the skin tones,, perfect,, look at the DOF ,, great,, look at the pose,, excellent,, look at the lighting,, almost right,, (a little more on the right to remove the shadow,, not much,, just a little),, look at the focus and the sharpness,, excellent,,
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