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Joe Ciccone
{K:3684} 7/13/2006
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thanks for viewing majid, cheers
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majid masood
{K:6931} 7/13/2006
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What an idea, you can fly if you lose some weight. Just kidding, You have been captured nicely. Great!!!!!!!!!
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Joe Ciccone
{K:3684} 7/13/2006
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nice work david...the girls not to pretty, not sure about removing the hair from her face...ha, ha...only joking...don't know of you saw my other posted shot where 2 of her friends are included....thanks for viewing...cheers
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david vieira
{K:729} 7/13/2006
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Hi Joe,
To my taste...now you can see her clean face. On the left there are no guys...(I could take out the ones on the right). Her left leg is nicer. I just skeezed her thies to correct her, to a more natural posture ( I know the chest now seems to big) this is to my taste of course...other people will have their opinion. David
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Joe Ciccone
{K:3684} 7/13/2006
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1- she was in a much busy part of the beach..
2- wind on her face was the wind on her face
3- whatever you tried to impove? not noticed, because you made the same mistake I made by working too fast..thanks for looking and your comments...cheers
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david vieira
{K:729} 7/13/2006
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Hi Joe, nice model...but there ae things that do not match:
a) the air on her face
b) her left leg gives the feeling that she was not originaly there.
c) skin tone, is a litle too dark´
d) the people on the background distracts from the main subject.
I hope you do not mind i post an alternative version (not finished but gives the idea), tell me what you think.
David
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