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Katherine Hagen
{K:2359} 4/2/2003
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Verna: This is a beautiful shot and you are right, she is glowing. The one thing that bothered me a bit is the veil behind the eyelash. I noticed later from the other posts that someone else noticed that too. Eyes are so important in portraits especially when they are profiles I too think that if that was cloned out the photo would have greater impact. Just a thought.
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Marco Grandi
{K:16680} 3/24/2003
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Splendid expression,good clarity,Verna.
Bye Marco,
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John Mitchell
{K:283} 3/24/2003
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The expression and pose are good but the lighting needs to be improved. The light on the face is too flat and needs to be moved to the left of the subjects face to create a Rembrandt or modified loop short side light to add shape to the face. This would also help to bring down the strong distracting glare on the model's upper lip.
The veil protruding from behind the far eye is very distracting.
Nice try but some changes can take it from good to excellent.
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Hayri CALISKAN
{K:16195} 3/24/2003
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Good portrait.
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Megan Forbes
{K:4617} 3/24/2003
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A capture of pure happiness. Good portrait, one to show her grandchildren one day.
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ml D
{K:2787} 3/24/2003
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Beautiful bride !!!
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