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al shaikh
{K:15790} 1/28/2002
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I like the original the best for its sense of proportion. The blurry area does not bother me because my gaze goes right to her eyes. I don't like the vertical crop or the other because it ruins the sense of space. (just my 2 electrons)
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Chris Blaszczyk
{K:610} 1/27/2002
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I think this will be better... The right side blur is caused by a pole. I hoped to have it the same way it looked in the camera's viewfinder. It created some fog-like effect, but going one F stop higher made it less apealing I guess.
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Scott Jones
{K:1093} 1/26/2002
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Hi Chris,
Nice shot. I like the way the person's gaze establishes the photographer's unseen presence and adds to the mystery of "what are you doing up there anyway?". I agree with the previous post about the right hand side. What happened here? I cropped and uploaded a view with that blurred area gone, but then the image beomes quite tall and skinny. Perhaps a little off the top as well OR perhaps just live with it. What are your thoughts?
Scott
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joe rizzuto
{K:158} 1/26/2002
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i dont care for the far right fuzziness (must be a pole or something) but i generally like the image. it looks so neat & tidy with all the awnings in a neat row. some tension would be good, like a mad dog running from just ahead. i like the look of most of your stuff and like that you investigate different angles. it's clear you put effort into your work and i think it shows!
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