Justyna:) Bardzo intrygujący, elegancki obraz. Przesunęłabym tylko nieco kadr w prawo i wyeksponowała bardziej dół twarzy modelki. Praca solidna, w najlepszym stylu. Pozdrawiam serdecznie:) Viola
OK, we have to ask why only 2 comments on his one? It's a nice soft photo of a beautiful model, innovative in technique, and well presented. I think it is the composition and proportion that fails. The left half of the photo is not very interesting, but receives the same emphasis as the face. Also, the line of the jaw is lost under the folds of the veil.
Maybe try a sharper angle for the pose and crop more to the right?
Still, I found the photo attractive and worthwhile. Thanks, Mark