Really great. It looks so much like a comic. The pose, the mask, the suit, everything so much like those agressive females comics are full of, plus the level of detail concerned only with lines and contours. I don't know if erotic was what you were going for. It's not necesarily an erotic photo. More like a futuristic pinup, or something like that.
The skin looks a bit too pink, though, a little unnatural. There are also a lot of black specks all over the suit, which give the photo an unfinished, experimental, appearance.