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Kiarang Alaei
{K:49415} 2/4/2005
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Nice and delicate documentary shot...
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G G
{K:61359} 1/9/2005
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Perfect Hanggan cropped like that
Take care
Fabrice
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cerebral marv
{K:217} 1/9/2005
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the expression of the children are the strength of this photo
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Dana Finchum
{K:2200} 1/8/2005
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Very nice portrait, the cropped version at the bottom focusses your attention on the children and is better.
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Karen Ferranti
{K:2959} 1/8/2005
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I was a bit distracted by the cart also. The cropped version is wonderful it brings the focal point back to the sad faces well done!
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Hanggan Situmorang
{K:37833} 1/8/2005
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Dear Fabrice,
Thanks for your comment. I have re-adjusted the composition. I think this is better..:)
Regards,
Hanggan
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Hanggan Situmorang
{K:37833} 1/8/2005
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Dear Melisa, the object on the right side is a "gerobak", a two-wheeled vehicle pushed by a merchant used to sell food and drinks in our country. I realize that you're true, because it distracts the focal point (the children). I have cropped it and you might want to give your opinion on this. Thanks a lot for sharing the precious comment.
Regards,
Hanggan
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Zeev Scharf
{K:25603} 1/8/2005
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Excellent capture, very dramatic composition
Best regards
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G G
{K:61359} 1/8/2005
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Nice capture Hanggan, and I like the sad face of the girl that you catched here. The tones are well managed but I'm agree with Melisa, in MHO, it would be better if a part of the right is cropped as it attracts to much the eye..
Anyway good work
Thank for sharing
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z z
{K:7231} 1/8/2005
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So sad! you have captured a emotion of unrest. I can't quite tell what the object is on the right hand side. It seems a bit dominate and my opinion would be to crop it out to focus on the faces... but of course that is just my very amature opinion. Nice work!
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