i hope it's the flatbed that messed with the light on the forehead. other than that little squabble, i think the lighting is a little too uneven. i find it too dark on the bottom and too light on top...not by much, just a little.
This quarter is the one that I will start studying the quality of light, and what works with certain lighting situations and what doesn't. Hopefully, I can get a model as easy to work with as she was, it made it so easy! Now just getting the lighting and filtration right )
Great quality of light. I'm not sure I love the pose (especially don't cut off her elbow) but the background is beautiful with the gently changing color. I think fairly soon you will be The Man with this studio work.