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Donna Jordan
{K:477} 10/14/2004
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Thank you for your comment. I cropped it this way because the little angel was wearing pink flip flops that didn't match the outfit. Cheers!
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Mike George
{K:3429} 10/5/2004
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Very interesting idea. I think I agree with Paolo. If the she is sort of leaning into the center of the shot as opposed to the outer edge might be better. I find my eye running off the right to see what she'll fall on. If it looks like she is leaning into the picture it might not have that effect on me. I do like the tracks, the pose, the exposure. Really neat idea. Just a thought to help it be even better.
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Paolo De Maio
{K:34932} 10/5/2004
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I think there is a lot of potential in this shot and in your daugther look too.
Try to shot it again tilting your camera on the right including her feet following exactly the diagonal from the left lower corner (her feet) to the right upper corner (her head) with a closer capture to emphasize her eyes and her smile.
Donna it's obviously a suggestion.
I hope to help you in thinking about composition, giving you another point of view....
All the best
(Sorry for my bad typed english I'm trying to improve it...)
Paolo
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Warren B
{K:7272} 10/5/2004
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A lovely shot, and I like the composition with the lines going out of the picture.
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Carlos A
{K:693} 10/5/2004
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beatifull image and model. Well done Donna!
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Marcy Massura
{K:1848} 10/5/2004
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GREAT shot- but a bit scary with her on the tracks! She looks like she is gonna cause trouble!
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