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Thilo Bayer
{K:50358} 5/20/2004
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interesting comp, verena. not too easy to perceive the actual motif, though. lots of details to watch. somehow my eyes lure for a vertical line to get some solid basis. well done b/w. cheers, thilo
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Uwe Bachmann
{K:10222} 5/18/2004
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da muss man erstmal einen moment schauen um sich zu orientieren...was nichts schlechtes heißen soll, im gegenteil, spricht es doch für einen außergewöhnlichen ausschnitt. die grauwerte sind, ich sehe das ähnlich wie hugo (wenn ich ihn denn überhaupt richtig verstehe ;-)) etwas flach, da könnte man tatsächlich noch etwas an der gradation basteln...aber das ist nur mein geschmack dann...
lg, uwe
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B:)liana
{K:30945} 5/18/2004
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very effective dear! I like the structure and texture. Kiss, Biliana
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Nando Mondino
{K:14261} 5/18/2004
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Wonderful perspective! 7
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NARCISSUS ALEMAO
{K:225} 5/18/2004
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GOOOOOD. BEAUTIFUL. MY TYPE OF ABSTRACTS. NARCIS
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Paolo Grusovin
{K:3344} 5/18/2004
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very nice
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Verena Rentrop
{K:15233} 5/18/2004
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Hi Hugo,
here I more like the subtle range of tones, I wanted it more soft and the result is exactly what I expected :)
BTW, the highest point is in front and also my neck was hurting a bit after taking this shot!
As I'm on my way from shot to shot I try to improve my style but it doesn't works every time!
Thanks for you almost open and elaborated criticism.
Cheers, Verena
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Michael Sean Fleming
{K:2267} 5/18/2004
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I love the perspective in this shot!
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WALT MESK
{K:10691} 5/17/2004
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great composition..... walt.
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Fabio Keiner
{K:81109} 5/17/2004
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:) puzzling perspectives
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Hugo de Wolf
{K:185110} 5/17/2004
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Hi Verena! Been visiting your neighbours? Good to see you're back.... )
Very interesting image. Creative, and very original. The tonal range is very suble, but well balanced. I know it sounds weird coming from me, and it's not something you can get a conclusive answer to, but I do think this one (again) would be very nice in a harder key too.... The tilt starts to hurt my neck as I try to figure which side is up....;o) Although I like the diagonal composition, I think it's a tad extreme, and the familiar tension and dynamism of your work is also a bit less strong... Don't get me wrong, here, I do like this shot, and find it very intriguing.
Cheers,
Hugo
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Shelley Weber
{K:190} 5/17/2004
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This is a very interesting shot. It is hard to tell which way is up, which I like. I am always interesting in odd perspectives. Nicely done
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Teunis Haveman
{K:53426} 5/17/2004
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Verena, beautiful compositie Teunis
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