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Patricia Eifel
{K:5097} 8/1/2003
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This is a lovely image. I would consider cropping a little off the left side to remove second swan and a comparable amount off the top to maintain good proportion. This would emphasize the arch of the rainbow through the arching highlight on the water to the swan--a great compositional combination. I agree that a little color adjustment might be good - but not too much.
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Lexie Summers
{K:2027} 7/30/2003
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Beautiful!! I have to agree with Scott. I think that it is wonderful but would look even better with a little work.
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Saba Ajayi Emmanuel
{K:24} 7/30/2003
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Hey,you are just fantastic.Keep up the good work.
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Scott Wiet
{K:353} 7/30/2003
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Jamie, I like the subject, but I would like to see some refinement. I would crop out the 2nd swan and center the composition on the rainbow and closer swan. The colors seem a little washed and could use some saturation perhaps. A fill flash on the closer swan would also make him pop out some more. You have a wonderful raw shot here that you can really do something with I think.
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peta jones
{K:12615} 7/30/2003
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What a lovely across the road you have Jamie. :) Beautiful illumination of the swans.
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Samvise Gamgee
{K:1999} 7/30/2003
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complimenti per lo scatto...
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Deleted User
{K:4318} 7/30/2003
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great timing
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Nando Mondino
{K:14261} 7/30/2003
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Great composition!My cps.
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