Kelly, I like this! Russ is right though, it begs for a long exposure. If you can get a tripod out there and shoot again, you'll get that silky water effect.
When ya gonna stop taking your stuff to wally world? Nice shot, I love moving water shots. Now do what every photog has done and grab yourself a tripod and do the same shot with a long exposure. We all have one in our collection, ya gotta do it! By the way I found a new film that I am trying, at least I think it's new, kodak 400 high defintion. I took some shots for my wife's art class, and I am impressed. Ya might give it a try.,